Hy,
I have write a dialoge, if there´s somthing wrong in it, I would like to know it.Please tell me, if you liked or don´t !
Bye deziana
At living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me money?”
Father: „For what you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I meet my friends today in the city, we want go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?”
Daughter: „Oh daddy, please we have weekend”
Father: „I know, it´s just the thing that I´m worried about you, then you´ve been every weekend at parties and so?”
Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
Father: „I´m not sure!”
Daughter: „Of course, I get this week a good mark in biology”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Thanks daddy, get I money from you now?”
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£ that´s too much?”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidy up my room and I want do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I save my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I couldn’t give you money, before I haven´t talk with mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes at home at evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem.”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends came in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”
a Dialog
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Angi
Hi, bin selbst Schülerin und hab mal versucht das ganze zu korrigieren. Hoffe es hilft dir ein wenig.
At the living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”
Father: „For what do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?”
Daughter: „Oh daddy, please we have weekend”
Father: „I know, it´s just the thing that I´m worried about you, then you´ve been every weekend at parties and so?” Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
(würde ich so nicht schreiben)
Father: „I´m not sure!”
Daughter: „Of course, I got this week a good mark in biology”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Thanks daddy, get I money from you now?”
(finde ich unhöflich. Ich würde sagen Could you give me money now, please?)
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£? that´s too much!”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I´m saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I couldn’t give you money, before I haven´t talked with your mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes at home at the evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem.”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”
At the living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”
Father: „For what do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?”
Daughter: „Oh daddy, please we have weekend”
Father: „I know, it´s just the thing that I´m worried about you, then you´ve been every weekend at parties and so?” Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
(würde ich so nicht schreiben)
Father: „I´m not sure!”
Daughter: „Of course, I got this week a good mark in biology”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Thanks daddy, get I money from you now?”
(finde ich unhöflich. Ich würde sagen Could you give me money now, please?)
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£? that´s too much!”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I´m saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I couldn’t give you money, before I haven´t talked with your mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes at home at the evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem.”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”
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deziana
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Angi
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deziana
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deziana
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Angi
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deziana
ich würde es dann so schreibenAngi hat geschrieben:ja würde ich aufjeden Fall dazuschreiben
wie willst dus formulieren?
Ich weiß, aber du solltest lieber nicht so oft am Wochende Party machen, sondern lieber etwas für die Schule lernen?!?
Father: „I know, but I´m worried about you you shouldn´t go out every weekend, you should lern for school" !
geht das so ???
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Angi
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deziana
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Angi
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deziana
Ich bin in der 8 klasse, hab den dialog alleine geschrieben, ich habe dazu keinen anfang bekommen.Angi hat geschrieben:finde ihn ganz okay. Ist das ne Hausaufgabe? In der wievielten Klasse bist du?
Was war die Aufgabe? Musstest du das alles selbstständig schreiben oder hast du nen Anfang bekommmen...?
Nun ja die aufgabe war ein Streitgespräch zu entwickeln zwischen 2 personen, und das muss ich in der klasse vorstellen.
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Angi
aso.
At the living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”
Father: „For what do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?” And if you don´t think that your pocket money is enough you should work one time and earn some money!
Daughter: „Oh dad... you don´t have a clue about my life! we have weekend and everybody get money, instead of me!”
Father: „Yes. They maybe don´t behave like you. If you would help your mother with the housework and learn for school, i would maybe give you more money!"
Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
But you can´t see that, because you are never at home!
Father: „Oh really? And what about your last math test?”
Daughter: „Dad it´s enogh! I got this week a good mark in biology”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Sure... Can you give me some money now?”
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? Are you crazy? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£? that´s too much!”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I´m saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I couldn’t give you money, before I haven´t talked with your mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes at home at the evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem?”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”
Hab mal den Anfang verändert, ich würde das ganze mehr nach einem Streit aussehen lassen
At the living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”
Father: „For what do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?” And if you don´t think that your pocket money is enough you should work one time and earn some money!
Daughter: „Oh dad... you don´t have a clue about my life! we have weekend and everybody get money, instead of me!”
Father: „Yes. They maybe don´t behave like you. If you would help your mother with the housework and learn for school, i would maybe give you more money!"
Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
But you can´t see that, because you are never at home!
Father: „Oh really? And what about your last math test?”
Daughter: „Dad it´s enogh! I got this week a good mark in biology”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Sure... Can you give me some money now?”
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? Are you crazy? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£? that´s too much!”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I´m saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I couldn’t give you money, before I haven´t talked with your mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes at home at the evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem?”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”
Hab mal den Anfang verändert, ich würde das ganze mehr nach einem Streit aussehen lassen
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deziana