Could you correct this text, please?

[Chloe]

Hello!
Could you correct this text, please!

"Thank you for your New year wishes! I'm very glad that my package brought you some pleasure. You're right, it's so nice to spend some days in the south especially while it's snowing in the homecountry. That's why I booked a flight to J. (the german airline "K" often has very good offer/bargain) and spent New Year's Eve there. I also booked an English course and was so happy that I didn't hear anybody and spent four terrific weeks in L. last year! I'm wondering that so many people learn English in J. and say that the L. don't speak English, but J. are people who really don't speak English. I mean they don't use it in everyday life. When I was in the shops or in the cafes, I always heard J. language. I remember our talk about learning English in J. You were right! I wasn't excited about the school and teacher there.... My classmates were always speaking their mother tongue and the teacher ignored them. To be honest, I was glad when my classes drew to an end.
Yesterday I arrived in S. My holiday wasn't that short. I spent two weeks in N. and one in J. , but it's interesting that the time has flown away so fast! My journey to S. was very nice. I spent a lot of time with my friends, went to the theater and bought some books. I can't leave any bookshop without a purchase, but it's embarrassing that I often forget them in my bookshelves. I might need an especial mood for reading, because I can't force myself to do it now and in the autumn I couldn't pass any books. I read everything that I saw."

Thank you!
Best wishes,
Chloe

[Delfino]

Hello!
Could you please correct this text?

Dear ...,

Thank you for your New Year wishes! I'm very glad that my package brought you some pleasure.
You're right, it was really nice to spend some days in the south especially while it was snowing in my home country.
Therefore I booked a flight to J. and spent New Year's Eve there. (Btw. the German airline "K" often has very good offers.)

I also booked an English course and spent four terrific weeks in L. last year. I was so happy that I didn't hear anybody speak German!
I'm wondering why so many people (try to) learn English in J. (Although) some say that the F. don't speak English.
But actually the people in J. don't speak English either. I mean they don't use it in their everyday life.
When I was in the shops or in the cafes I always heard people speak German.

I remember our conversation about learning English in J. You were right!
I wasn't excited about the school and teachers there. My classmates were always talking in their mother tongue and the teacher ignored it.
To be honest, I was glad when my classes drew to an end.

Yesterday I arrived in S. My holidays weren't that short. I spent two weeks in N. and one in J. , but it's a shame that the time has past so fast!
My journey to S. was very nice. I spent a lot of time with my friends, went to the theater and bought some books. I can't leave any bookshop without a purchase,
but it's embarrassing that I often forget them in my bookshelves. (In your bookshelves at home or at the place you stayed for your visit?)
I guess I need to be in a special mood for reading, because I can't force myself to do it now while I couldn't pass any books in autumn.
I read everything I saw.

Thanks again!

Best wishes,
Chloe