Bitte um Korrektur All my sons

[saturn]

Guten Morgen zusammen.

Ich habe hier einen Text , besser gesagt summary Act 3, geschrieben und bin mir unsicher, ob alles soweit ok ist oder ob man da noch etwas kürzen sollte.

The drama " All My Sons" is written by the American autor Arthur Miller in 1947 and plays (is playing?) after the World War Two. The drama consists of three-acts. This act is about a dramatically family discussion betwen the guilty father Joe Keller, his wife Kate and their son Chris. Chris want goes away for good to Cleveland because he does not forgive his father, that he did a mistake. Joe K. works as a successful businessman and sells airplane parts for the World War. Because of the mistake died 21 pilots. Joe is arrested because his partner Steve D. says that Joe did this mistake. Ann is Steve`s daughter and want to go away with Chris. Earlier she was the girlfriend of Larry,Chris` brother. Then Joe comes in the house and want to talk with Chris, but he does not want it. They begins to quarrel. Chris blames his father because he did this mistake and that Larry killed himself. Because of Larry and the 21 pilots Chris want arrests Joe again. Joe does not understand it and he says that he is no worse than any other man, but Chris thought this. As Chris want to go away Ann gives him a letter of Larry, who wrote it (has written ?) on this day as he killed himself.But the three discuss further. They go out the house and then they hear a gunshot inside. Joe has killed himself. Chris did not want it.

Ich hoffe ich habe auch alle Kommas richtig gesetzt.

Vielen Dank im Voraus
LG

[Delfino]

Guten Morgen zusammen.
Ich habe hier einen Text oder besser gesagt eine summary des Act 3 geschrieben
und bin mir unsicher, ob alles soweit ok ist oder ob man da noch etwas kürzen sollte.

The drama "All My Sons" was written by the American author Arthur Miller in 1947 and is set after the World War Two.
The drama consists of three acts.
The third act is about an intense family discussion betwen the guilty(relevance?) father Joe Keller, his wife Kate and their son Chris.
Chris wants to go to Cleveland for good because he does not forgive his father for his mistake.
Joe K. works as a successful businessman who sells airplane parts to the military.
Faulty airplane parts inadvertently caused the deaths of 21 pilots.
Joe is arrested because his partner Steve D. says that Joe made them.
Ann is Steve's daughter who wants to go away with Chris.
At some earlier point in time she was the girlfriend of Larry, Chris' brother who died in a plane crash.
Then Joe comes in the house and wants to talk with Chris who does not want to.
They begins to quarrel.
Chris blames his father for the mistake he made and the death of Larry.
Chris wants Joe to be arrested again because of Larry's and the 21 pilots death.
Joe does not understand him.
He says that he is not worse than any other man, but Chris thinks he is.
When Chris is about to go away (geht er allein?) Ann gives him a letter of Larry which was written on the day he crashed with an airplane.
The three (Wer?) continue their discussion outside the house.
Then they hear a gunshot inside and find out that Joe has killed himself.
Chris did not want this.

Beachte den Zeitpunkt des Bekanntwerdens von Larry's suicide
vorher ist er nur crashed with an airplane and MIA (missing in action)

Wiederhole:
- englische Satzstellung ( http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/inhalt_grammar.htm )
- Verben 3. Person Singular ( -s)
- Benutzung Wörterbuch (e.g. http://www.linguee.de )
und Internet ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/All_My_Sons )
- Aktivierung englischer Rechtschreibkontrolle in deinem Textverarbeitungsprogramm

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Guten Morgen zusammen. Frohes Neues Jahr!

Ich habe hier einen Text, besser gesagt summary Act 3, geschrieben und bin mir unsicher, ob alles soweit ok ist, oder ob man da noch etwas kürzen sollte.

The drama/play "All My Sons" was written by the American author Arthur Miller in 1947. It is set after World War Two. The drama has three acts.
The third act shows a serious family discussion betwen the guilty father Joe Keller, his wife Kate and their son Chris. Chris wants to goes away for good to Cleveland because he cannot forgive his father that he made a mistake. Joe K. works as a successful businessman and sold airplane parts during the World War. 21 pilots died because of this mistake. (Ich kenne das Stück nicht: hat er fehlerhafte Teile verkauft, oder ist der Fehler ein moralischer, nämlich dass er überhaupt in der Rüstung gearbeitet hat? Das musst Du eben noch sagen. Hier geht es jetzt etwas durcheinander, die Zeiten stimmen nicht: Wird Joe jetzt verhaftet, wie kann er dann mit seinem Sohn streiten? Oder ist er bereits wieder draussen und kommt dazu?) Joe was?? arrested because his partner Steve D. had blamed?? the mistake on him. Ann is Steve's daughter and wants to go away with Chris. She used to be Larry's girlfriend, who was Chris' brother. Then Joe comes in the house and wants to talk with Chris, but he does not want to. They begins to quarrel. Chris puts the blame of Larry's suicide on his father's mistake and wants to have him arrested for his and the 21 pilots' deaths. Joe does not understand his accusation and he says that he is no worse than any other man. Chris does not agree. When Chris wants to go away, Ann hands him Larry's letter, written on the day of his suicide. The row goes on until the young people leave. When they are outside they hear a gunshot: Joe has killed himself. That was not Chris' intention.

Ich hoffe, ich habe auch alle Kommas richtig gesetzt.

Vielen Dank im Voraus
LG

Grüße
Duckduck

EDIT: Hi Delfino, Happy New Year! Ich habe ab und zu etwas andere Vorschläge, also lasse ich meinen Beitrag auch stehen!

[saturn]

Vielen, vielen Dank an euch beide für die liebe Hilfe.Gestern Abend ist mir ein inhaltlicher Fehler eingefallen.