Cover letter - viell. jmd Lust/Zeit drüber zu schauen???

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puby1010

Cover letter - viell. jmd Lust/Zeit drüber zu schauen???

Beitrag von puby1010 »

Hallo Zusammen,

nachdem ich gesehen habe, dass hier hin und wieder cover letter "korrigiert" werden, dachte ich mir, ich versuche mein Glück einfach mal.

Viell. findet ja jmd Zeit mal drüber zu schauen und mir noch Fehler (Grammatik, Stil, Rechtschreibung) zu benennen, das wäre ganz wunderbar :)

Ansonsten wünsche ich noch einen guten Start ins neue Jahr :)

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Dear Sir or Madam ,

with pleasure I have just been informed, that ... is looking for motivated interns as ..... I will not miss this opportunity and apply for this job for an engagement for about three months. My preferred termination would begin in April or May 2011 but the beginning can be arranged after a consultation.

Currently I’m doing an internship at ......Germany within the field of Corporate Communications. Meanwhile I am attending my seventh semester at the ....university. I am studying European studies, which is a composition of history, philosophy, sociology and politics. My minor subject is cultural sciences. This internship is a distinguished chance for me to become acquainted with the international policy and to discover the various prospects in the international policy. I consider this internship as continuation and extension of my past practical exposures.

Through diverse internships and several side jobs during my academic studies I gained experiences about the operations in editorial offices, in the field of communication science, in the area of marketing, public relation and project management. Multiple additional qualifications, for example in press, project management and organisation and business studies, provide me with the ability to handle the requirements. I achieve all preconditions like political interest, strong verbal and written english skills and the will to change something because of the climate change. I would like to insert all my enthusiasm to an assistance for you and your work.

My fast apprehension furthermore allocates me with the continuous will to improve my education on a personal and a professional level. I would be pleased to support your organisation with my responsible, independent and disciplined approach with a maximum commitment.

I would like to complete your first impressions from my application documents with an interview.

I thank you for taking the time to consider my application and I would be delighted to hear soon from you.

Yours faithfully

Delfino

Re: Cover letter - viell. jmd Lust/Zeit drüber zu schauen???

Beitrag von Delfino »

puby1010 hat geschrieben: Dear Sir or Madam,

With pleasure I have just been informed, that you are looking for an motivated ... Intern.
So I will not miss this opportunity and hereby apply for this position.
I would prefer to start in April or May 2011 but I am flexible.

Currently I’m doing an internship at ... Germany within the field of corporate communications.
Meanwhile I am attending lectures of my seventh semester at the ... University.
I am studying European Studies, which is a composition of history, philosophy, sociology and politics.
My minor subject is Cultural Sciences.
This internship will be a distinguished chance for me to become acquainted with the international policy of ... and to discover the various career prospects within this field/area.
I would (really) like to gain further practical exposure with this internship.

Through diverse internships and several side jobs during my academic studies I gained experiences in an editorial office, in the field of communication science, in the area of marketing, public relation and project management.
Multiple additional qualifications, for example in press (?), project management and business studies, provide me with the ability to fulfill your requirements.
I have political interest, strong verbal and written English skills and the will to change something because of the climate change.
I would like to use all my enthusiasm to assist you in your work.

Furthermore, my fast apprehension allows me to continuously improve myself on a personal and a professional level.
I would be pleased to support your organisation with my responsible, independent and disciplined approach and a maximum commitment.

I thank you for taking the time to consider my application.
I would be delighted to hear from you (soon) and complete your first impressions with an interview.

Yours faithfully
engagement - a promise to marry, and also the period of time between proposal and marriage

termination - various uses...
You are not planing total destruction as in the movie or your own slow execution (3 month), are you?

consultation - a formal meeting with a medical doctor for discussion or the seeking of advice


for motivated interns = Plural => mehrere Jobs zu vergeben
apply for this job => Singular => welcher der o.g. Jobs?

Auch wenn mehrere gleiche Interns gesucht werden, würde ich in der Bewerbung nur Singular verwenden,
da du dich ja nur für einen der Jobs bewirbst. Die Jobbezeichnung "... Intern" wird immer groß geschrieben.

for example...

wird nicht zur Einleitung einer vollständigen Liste verwendet
Organisation und Projekt Manaement sind sehr ähnliche Gebiete.

Delfino

Re: Cover letter - viell. jmd Lust/Zeit drüber zu schauen???

Beitrag von Delfino »

Furthermore, my quick comprehension ...

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Cover letter - viell. jmd Lust/Zeit drüber zu schauen???

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

No contractions, please!
Currently I am doing an internship at...
Duckduck