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[Fireflies]

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Holger Schmitt takes his children out from class because he thinks the proportion of foreigners is too high.
Furthermore he believes that his children will learn more, if there are more German children in the class and a high proportion of migrants is not beneficial affect for the education. The headmaster and the reporters imagine that he is extremely right-wing and should not bear responsibility for his two kids.
A statistic from 2008 shows that more than 6% of the German pupils and 15% of the foreigner children leave the school without a school leaving qualification.
Is the father xenophobic? Or is this a sign of sense of responsibility if a father chooses the best choice of education for his children?

A big issue is that many foreign children do not grow up with German. In addition they do not speak the German language at home; they speak always in their own native language and that is the reason why they often have a lack of German knowledge, pronunciation and grammar. When the family migrate from they own home country to Germany, they always move in area where a lot of people like them live. So it is difficult for the kids to learn German and they will always have trouble in school. The kids feel insecure and not comfort because sometimes they do not understand the teacher or the pupils. This enables that the foreign children prefer to speak their own native language instead of German in school.

German children will also suffer under this issue that many foreign children do not speak German in class. Because the learning process will be adjust in consideration of to the foreigner children. When foreigner children become in school, they need to be first learn German and impede the common education. In many cases German pupils can not develop because the teacher must be more concentrate on foreigner children for a better integration. So the German people become neglect because the foreigner children need more help in everyday school life.

So what we can do that we help foreigner children in their everyday school life and do not neglect German pupils?
Probably before children go to school, they have to do a language test. Whether they have achieved a specific language level or not. After this test the teacher must decide if he is willing for the school or is it better when he stays a year longer in the Kindergarten.
Another good facet is that there should be more effort in the Kindergarten for foreigner children and more offers which prepare foreigner children for everday school life.

[Delfino]

Es wäre sehr nett, wenn jemand über meine Essay schauen und mich auf evtl. Fehler hinweiesen könnte

Holger Schmitt takes his children out of class, because he thinks the proportion of foreigners is too high.
Furthermore, he strongly believes that his children will learn more where more children in the class are German and that a high proportion of migrants does not have a beneficial effect on their education.
The headmaster and the reporters think that his views are extremely right-wing and he should not bear responsibility for his two kids.
A statistic from 2008 shows that more than 6% of the German pupils and 15% of the foreigner children leave the school without a school leaving qualification.
Is the father xenophobic? Or is this a sign of his sense of responsibility if a father tries to choose the best education for his children?

A big issue is that many foreign children did not grow up with German. In addition, they do not speak the German language at home.
At home they always speak the native language of their parents which is often the main reason for their lack of knowledge of German words, pronunciation and grammar.
When a family migrates from their home country to Germany they often move to an area where a lot of people with a similar background live.
So it is difficult for the kids to learn German which creates big challenges for them at school.
These kids feel insecure and not welcome because they do not always understand the teacher or the other pupils.
This leads to the common situation that the foreign children prefer to speak their native language instead of German even in school.

German children will also suffer from this issue that many foreign children do not speak German in class.
The progress in class is often adjusted in consideration of the foreign children.
When foreign children come to school they need to learn German first to avoid a significant interference with the common education later on.
In many cases German pupils can not reach their full potential, because the teacher concentrates on the full integration of the foreign children, which means slowing down everyone else.
So the German pupils are often neglected, because the foreign children need more help in everyday school life.

So what can we do to help foreign children in their everyday school life and to avoid neglecting German pupils?
I guess the foreign children should have to pass a language test before they go to school.
Such a test could determine a specified level of German language skills.
The test result gives the teacher an indication for his decision to accept a child in school or to leave it in kindergarten for another year.
Another positive side effect should be an increased effort in the kindergarten to prepare foreign children for everday school life.

Warum würden deutsche Eltern (wie der o.g. Vater) einen gemischten Kindergarten akzeptieren - wenn sie die entsprechende Schulen ablehnen?

Wenn ausländische Kinder ein gewisses Niveau an Deutschkenntnissen haben müssen
warum eigentlich nicht auch die deutschen Kinder (insbesondere die der ärmeren Eltern) testen?
(Wohlhabende Eltern schicken ihre Kinder schon jetzt in private Kindergärten mit Deutsch- und Englischunterricht.)

Wo lernt die Mehrheit der deutsche Kinder die Grundlagen und Feinheiten der deutsche Sprache -
vom Babysitter, im Kindergarten oder in der Schule?

Wo sollen die ausländischen Kinder die deutsche Sprache lernen, um den Aufnahmetest zu bestehen?

Ist das Kindergartenpersonal überhaupt entsprechend ausgebildet?

Wer bezahlt das alles?