wäre nett wenn sich einer kurz die mühe macht und meinen text überfliegt und ein paar fehler beseitigen könnt:
Oh no I am so lonely. My cat has run away and that’s why I am here alone in the bar. That is what the others should think about me. But for real I just want to hook up with a pretty guy today. I am sitting here in a dark corner since one hour and I am so drunk right now. There is an attractive man at the bar. I noticed him because the barkeeper asked him something about “the Bond thing”. I want to know more about him. If I shout to him he will immediately notice that I am drunk. I will drop the glass and act like a drunken clumsy girl which isn’t responsible anymore. The barkeeper and the pretty man are watching at me. The bartender whispers something in the other guy’s ear, but I can’t understand a single word. Yes, it works! The pretty guy is walking to me. I have a lively conversation with him and I am still waiting for the “ultimate Question”. “Yes let’s go home.” I answered instantly. On the way out of the bar the other barkeeper asks me “shall I take care of your cat again?”, damn I hope the guy I am leaving the bar with doesn’t notice that I am using this tactic pretty often to hook up with men.
thank you
