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Jerome

Hab mir jetzt einen neuen Text überlegt -.-

Beitrag von Jerome »

Ich hab mir jetzt nochmal einen neuen Text überlegt und versucht die vielen Fehler auszulassen, ich hoffe es ist mir gelungen.



Hello Jerome.
You're idea was good but it will be never alloweds for 15-years old people to make the driver-licence.
Because they can't take responbility for they're own and other people in the traffic.
And I don't think that such young people are outside at night with his or her friends.
Another piont is that the parents are always afraid when their young children drive with the car.
But on the other hand the young people will be indipendent from their parents, and for the parents the everyday life won´t be so stressful.
I thank you for you're godd offer and ideas.
With many greetings A. Merkel


Vielen Dank für eure Mühen
Jerome

Jefferson1992

Re: Hab mir jetzt einen neuen Text überlegt -.-

Beitrag von Jefferson1992 »

Hello Jerome.

You're idea was good but I think the government/state will never allowed 15 year old teenager to get the driving-licence, because they can't take on a responbility for their own and other people in traffic.

And I don't think that their are so many young people, who are outside with friends at night. (?????)

Another argument is that the parents are always afraid of young people driving a car.

But on the other hand young people will be independent of their parents, and for their parents the everyday life won´t be so stressful.

I thank you for your good offers and ideas.

greetings

A. Merkel

I don't know if I found all mistakes, because it was a very faulty text.