Text: How my mobile phone saved my life

[Guest2024-02]

Guten Abend alle zusammen,

ich habe zu morgen einen text zu diesemaufbekommen. Hatte allerdings 1ne woche zeit. Jetzt wollte ich fragen, ob ihr euch den einfach nochmal angucken könnt. Der ist nicht ziemlich lang und viel inhalt ging auch nicht, weil wir nur 180 wörter haben durften höchstens 200:

   
How my mobile phone saved my life

I did not think that a day with a mobile is so important.


I have become my mobile one week ago to my 14^th birthday, but I did not take it with me, because I forgot it every day on my table. On a Friday the 13^th, I had to go to a lonely bus-station. I wanted to drive to a friend, but I never think that anything can happen on this trip. Suddenly a man came out of the forest and tugged me in a car with black windows. I lied there and screamed, but nobody heard it. I call up the police and they could find me with the GPS-System. They follow the signal of my mobile- phone. They said that I had to wait a few minutes. Then the car arrived at a lonely industrial area. The man went out of the car and he shouted: ‘’Go out of the car, fast! I hope your parents will pay a lot of money for you, or...’’ I heard a shoot and a man was crying. A police officer came to me and said: ‘’Hello you are free.’’
Now I always take a mobile with me!
Danke im Vorraus.
Mfg

[choccy_hobnob]

Hallo deathman2912! Boah, das war schon eine spannende Geschichte! Hoffentlich basiert sie nicht auf deinem wirklichen Leben, oder...?!

How my mobile phone saved my life

I did not think that a day with a mobile could be so important. Besser: "I didn't think it could be so important to carry a mobile phone!"

I received my mobile a week ago for my 14^th birthday, but at first I did not take it out with me, because I kept leaving it on my table. On a Friday the 13^th, I had to go to a lonely bus station. I wanted to get to to a friend's house, but I never thought that anything could happen on this trip. Suddenly, a man came out of the forest and dragged me into a car with black windows. I lay there and screamed, but nobody could heard me. I called up the police, who were able to find me using the GPS system, which followed the signal of my mobile- phone. They said that I would have to wait a few minutes. Then the car arrived at a lonely industrial area. The driver got out of the car and he shouted: "Get out of the car, fast! I hope your parents will pay a lot of money for you, or..." I heard a shot and then a man was crying. A police officer came over to me and said: "Hello, you're free." Now I always take a mobile with me!

[joy]

Noch eine kleine Korrektur:

...... but nobody could heard me

[choccy_hobnob]

Ach, ich bin eben zu blind für dieses Forum! Danke joy