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A Smart Kid by Porcupine Tree
The song has a length of 5 minutes and 22 seconds and appears in the 1999 on the album Stupid Dream. It tells the story of a child on earth who is visited by an alien spaceship. The first three verses describe our planet without any humans. The child is the only person who is living there. The next section deals with the natural circumstances. It is shown that there was a long winter period and the planet earth is littered with chemicals. In the third part it is said, that the child is just waiting and that he doesn’t know what else he can do. So the verses show the helplessness and powerlessness of the child.At the next moment visit a spaceship the earth and the aliens asked about the other people on earth. The child can only tell them that there has been a war in which they have probably won. Because of the fact that the child is alone, he wants that the spaceship take him.
Finally, I can say that the earth is described in this dystopia song as a lonely and ruined place. There are no humans anymore and the sun can’t be seen again.


An example of an utopian song: Utopia by Goldfrapp
The song has a length of 4 minutes and 15 seconds and appears in year 2000.
It begins with a description of the environment. In the world are no colors and no sounds. The person forgets who he is and what he feels.
In the second part of the song it is said that humans can act like God. He can change the life of his dog and give him new eyes.The last part of the song tells that the world is created humans. For example the person in this song was born as a super brain.Finally, I can say that the earth is described in this utopian song as a place in which the people can create their own sphere. The people are like to enter a trance and have no feelings but on the other hand they are very clever.


Personal conclusion about utopia and dystopia in music:
I like the description of utopia and dystopia in songs, because the instruments or the melody can emphasize the message of the song. It is also possible that the song create an atmosphere for the listener in what way he can sympathizes the same feelings like the protagonist in the song.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

A Smart Kid by Porcupine Tree
The song is 5 minutes and 22 seconds long and appears on the 1999 on the album Stupid Dream. It tells the story of a child on earth who is visited by an alien spaceship. The first three verses describe our planet without any humans. The child is the only person who is living there. The next section deals with the natural circumstances. It is shown that there was a long winter period and the planet earth is littered with chemicals. In the third part it is said, that the child is just waiting and that it does not know what else it can do. So the verses show the helplessness and powerlessness of the child. The next moment a spaceship visits the earth and the aliens ask what happened to the other people on earth. The child can only tell them that there was a war in which they have probably won. Because of the fact that the child is alone, it wants that the spaceship to take it.
Finally, I can say that the earth is described in this dystopia song as a lonely and ruined place. There are no humans anymore and the sun can’t be seen (again.)



So.. hier ende ich nun meine Verbesserung, denn wenn ich das lese (und auch auf die Textformatierung achte) wird es schnell klar, dass du den folgenden Text gestueckelt zusammengesetzt hast, aber leider nicht selber geschrieben.


An example of an utopian song: Utopia by Goldfrapp
The song has a length of 4 minutes and 15 seconds and appears in year 2000.
It begins with a description of the environment. In the world are no colors and no sounds. The person forgets who he is and what he feels.
In the second part of the song it is said that humans can act like God. He can change the life of his dog and give him new eyes.The last part of the song tells that the world is created humans. For example the person in this song was born as a super brain.Finally, I can say that the earth is described in this utopian song as a place in which the people can create their own sphere. The people are like to enter a trance and have no feelings but on the other hand they are very clever.


Personal conclusion about utopia and dystopia in music:
I like the description of utopia and dystopia in songs, because the instruments or the melody can emphasize the message of the song. It is also possible that the song create an atmosphere for the listener in what way he can sympathizes the same feelings like the protagonist in the song.