Prüfung: Airsoft - Korrektur bitte nur heute, morgen Prüfung

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Einen schönen guten Tag, ein wenig kurzfristig und ich bin auch nicht böse wenn es niemand korrigiert da ja nur wenige Stunden Zeit sind.ich würde mich freuen wenn jemand mal über diesen Text darüber schaut und eventuell korrigiert, habe morgen meine Prüfung dann mündlich und da will ich alles richtig sagen.

1.)What’s Airsoft
Airsoft is a tactical area game, where equipped teams with Softair weapons line up against each other. The game also named Airsoft or Skirmish.

Airsoft are two different categories. The first is sports side. Teams with Softair weapons line up against each other. It’s a fair competition where normal people follow clear rules and have fun.

The other side a demonstration and collection of Airsoft. Most of the people collect the weapons and the gear to show them other people. When you combine these two sections you get a combination of operations and military to become a lively production.
2.)Why do people play
Most of people play because it’s not illegal to use these weapons. Later I will explain a bit more, how the laws in Germany are. It’s a hobby as every other one. Most people judge really false about this sport activity. It’s the same prejudice like a PC Game, e.g. Counter Strike. Aggressions and violence is devised. You can play two hours or even two days. Its really nice and your on the air, most of the time between trees.
3.)Some important law’s in Germany
First, you can’t play everywhere. It’s not possible to play Airsoft at the street.
That’s forbidden. You must have an own land or lease it. Then it’s important you call the police because the weapons look really real. Often it’s not possible that the police see the difference and must react fast.

4.)Safety precautions
It’s important you wear glasses to protect your eyes, but you can’t wear normal glasses because the energy is too much and broke them.
Then you need trousers, a T-Shirt and a jacked. The BB’s are so heavy that they can hurt your skin.
The last what you need are shoes, good shoes. It’s possible that an area has a board with nails and you hurt your foot.
Now you’re protected and if you hurt yourself it’s because of your own silliness.
5.)Injuries
It’s possible while playing Softair you can hurt yourself everywhere:
Broken your leg, your foot or injure your hand, cut your skin.
It’s a sport and its like every other sport you can hurt everywhere.

If you don’t wear glasses you lost your eyes and you must wear a glassed eye.
If you don’t wear trousers, T-Shirt or a jacked your skin will injure.
If you don’t wear shoes and you step into a nail or a sharp edge of a stone it’s possible some dirt gets into and you become a blood poisoning.

Freundliche Grüße.

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Danke trotzdem ist schon zu spät. Hoffe ist nicht ganz so falsch.
Kann geschlossen werden - Grüße!