Dear Angela Merkel I want to ask if the driver-licence can be allowed for 15 years old children because it has many good sites for example, the children are indipendence from their parents and we are always at school at 8 o'clock. They can drive with the car if they come home at night, it´s saver to drive with his own car then drive with the bus because if some criminals aussault you or something other bad things can happen.Another good point for my offer is that we don´t annoy our parents we want to visit our friends or we come back home late and we wanna that our parents call us.I think 15 years old children are so collar like other 18 years old mans.I hope for a good statement.
With many greeting Jerome.
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Dear Angela Merkel
I would like to ask you if the driving licence can be allowed for 15-year-old people because it will have many good sides. For example, young people will be independent from their parents and parents will not have to take us to school every morning that begins at 8 o'clock already. Well, I must admit that young people can travel home by bus at night, however, travelling by their own car is saver because nowadays criminals are assaulting you or other bad things are happening. Another good point for my request is that we will not annoy our parents any longer if we want to visit our friends or we come back home late. And our parents will be able to enjoy the evenings without being worried about us and so having to call us again and again. (so schreiben, dass es für die Eltern positiv klingt) I think 15 year-old people act just as responsibly as 18 year-old ones. I hope for a good statement and thank you in advance.
With best regards Jerome (Wenn man jemand gut kennt)
Yours sincerely (formaler)
Hi Jerome
Statt "children" finde ich es besser "young people" zu schreiben, da es sonderbar erscheint, wenn Kinder Auto fahren.
L.G. joy
I would like to ask you if the driving licence can be allowed for 15-year-old people because it will have many good sides. For example, young people will be independent from their parents and parents will not have to take us to school every morning that begins at 8 o'clock already. Well, I must admit that young people can travel home by bus at night, however, travelling by their own car is saver because nowadays criminals are assaulting you or other bad things are happening. Another good point for my request is that we will not annoy our parents any longer if we want to visit our friends or we come back home late. And our parents will be able to enjoy the evenings without being worried about us and so having to call us again and again. (so schreiben, dass es für die Eltern positiv klingt) I think 15 year-old people act just as responsibly as 18 year-old ones. I hope for a good statement and thank you in advance.
With best regards Jerome (Wenn man jemand gut kennt)
Yours sincerely (formaler)
Hi Jerome
Statt "children" finde ich es besser "young people" zu schreiben, da es sonderbar erscheint, wenn Kinder Auto fahren.
L.G. joy