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Facebook Interpretation Verbesserung bzw. Ergänzung

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Interpretation about the text
Facebook: The world's social network
Facebook is one of the largest and most popular social networks to share in the several million users and find old friends.
The founder and CEO of Facebook named Mark Zuckerberg. He is only 26 and he is alreeady a billionaire by dient of Facebook. Zuckerberg studied computer science at Harvard, and it was there that he and some friends dreamed up the social network site Facebook. At first it was only to use for students at Harvard, but after time Facebook was the world's social network. Facebook had more than 500 million active users, so is one of the most visited sites on the internet.
As already called, is Facebook a social network to keep in touch, share thoughts and photos, write messages und even find old friends they had lost contact. Nevertheless, Facebook hast a Problem to keep personal information. It may be that the personal information can become public. Facebook-Users can enable this settings, but it is too complex for someone.
Today, the film Facebook is in the theaters. The film tells the story of how Facebook was founded and paints a rather negative picture of Zuckerberg. But people who know Zuckerberg and have worked with him say he hasn't a negativ character as in the film it represented. Zuckerberg himself hasn't commented much on the film, because he takes this with humor, what a lot of fiction includes.



Vielen Dank

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joy

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kiro55 hat geschrieben:Guten Abend,


könntet ihr mir bitte helfen diesen Text zu verbessern und zu ergänzen, falls etwas fehlt.

Interpretation about the text
Facebook: The world's social network
Facebook is one of the largest and most popular social networks to share in the several million users and find old friends.
The founder and CEO of Facebook named Mark Zuckerberg is only 26 years of age but already a billionaire by dient? founding / managing? the Facebook. Zuckerberg studied computer science at Harvard, and it was there where he and some friends of him dreamed up the social network site Facebook. At first it was only available for students at Harvard, but over time Facebook has developed into / has become the world's social network. Facebook has more than 500 million active users, so is one of the most visited sites on the internet.
On the one hand, Facebook makes it possible for you to get in touch with everyone, share thoughts and photos, write messages und even find old friends you have lost contact with. But on the other hand, Facebook hast the problem to keep personal information secret. It may be that the personal information can become public. Facebook users can enable this settings, but it is too complex for someone. (Hier versehe ich nicht, was du sagen möchtest)
Today, the Facebook-film "The Social Network" is on at the theaters. The film tells the storty of how Facebook was founded and paints a rather negative picture of Zuckerberg. But people who know Zuckerberg and have worked with him say he isn't a man with a negative character as represented in the film. Zuckerberg himself hasn't commented much on the film that includes a lot of fiction, because he takes this with humor what a lot of fiction includes.




Vielen Dank

:D
 Grüsse
joy

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Facebook Interpretation Verbesserung bzw. Ergänzung

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kiro55 hat geschrieben:Guten Abend, Hi kiro55, aber gerne!

könntet ihr mir bitte helfen diesen Text zu verbessern und zu ergänzen, falls etwas fehlt.

Interpretation of the text (Ist dies ist eine Zusammenfassung eines Textes? Dann wäre es "summary", denn ich sehe nicht viel von Interpretation...)

Facebook: The world's social network
Facebook is one of the largest and most popular social networks. It is visited by several million users to find new friends and communicate with old friends.
The founder and CEO of Facebook is called Mark Zuckerberg. He is only 26, but he is alreeady a billionaire by dient of Facebook. Zuckerberg studied computer science at Harvard, and it was there that he and some friends dreamed up the social network site Facebook. At first it was only for the use of students at Harvard, but with time Facebook became the world's social network. Facebook has more than 500 million active users, so it is one of the most visited sites on the internet.
As already mentioned, Facebook is a social network to keep in touch, share thoughts and photos, write messages und even find old friends you lost sight of. Nevertheless, Facebook hast/faces a serious problem: to keep personal information of the users secret. It has happened that the personal information became public. There are, of course, certain protections users can employ, but these tend to be too complex for someone to use. (Hier fällt mir der Fachausdruck nicht mal im Deutschen ein...Wissende vor!)
Today, cinemas all over the world are screening the film "Facebook". The film tells the story of how Facebook was founded and paints a rather negative picture of Zuckerberg. But people who know Zuckerberg and have worked with him say his character is not nearly as negative as depicted in the film. Zuckerberg himself has not commented much on the film. He takes it on the chin, since it includes a lot of fiction.



Vielen Dank

:D
Bitte sehr, kiro!

Hallo liebe joy, Du warst schneller, jetzt können wir ja mal vergleichen, ja! Schönen Sonntag für Alle!

Duckduck

kiro55

Re: Facebook Interpretation Verbesserung bzw. Ergänzung

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Ja, stimmt es ist eher eine Zusammenfassung eines Textes.
Ich danke euch beiden für die Korrektur meines Textes :D.

Schönen Abend noch.