Help me to correct some sentences, please!

[Chloe]

Hello!
I'd be very thankful, if you could correct the following sentences.

"I'm sorry that I've not got in touch with you earlier. I think so often of you and my stay in P
.... One can learn so much working or just being/living abroad among other culture. That's why I'm very happy to have had this experience...

Now I have a lot of work at my college. I have to do many prasentations in different subjects, but I'm very glad about it because I'm afraid of speaking in front of many people and in this way I can learn getting past this fear. Was it difficult for you to work as a teacher and to stay/ propound in front of many students?.....He

is surely happy about holidays yet!(Er freut sich sicherlich schon jetzt auf die Ferien!)

Give him and R. my best regards, please! (Bestelle bitte ihm und R. meine liebsten Grüße!)"


With best wishes,
Chloe

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hello! Hi Chloe!
I'd be very thankful if you could correct the following sentences. Also wirklich... dieses Komma bei den if-Sätzen! Es steht nur dann, wenn der if-Teil vorne steht, also vor dem Hauptsatz, sonst nicht, ja?!

"I'm so sorry I didn't get in touch with you before. I think of you and my stay in P so often
.... One can learn so much working or just staying abroad, living in another culture. That's why I'm very happy to have had this experience...

At the moment I have a lot of work at my college. I have to give many talks in different subjects. So I'm very busy, but I'm also glad about it. I'm a little shy when it comes to speaking in front of many people and in this way I can learn to get past this fear. Was it difficult for you to work as a teacher and stand in front of many students?.....
I'm sure he's already looking forward to the holidays!  (Er freut sich sicherlich schon jetzt auf die Ferien!)

Give him and R. my best regards, please! (Bestelle bitte ihm und R. meine liebsten Grüße!)"


With best wishes,
Chloe

Fein, Chloe!
Dass da jetzt wieder etwas mehr grün ist, heißt keineswegs, dass da viel falsch war, sondern es sind Vorschläge, wie es vielleicht manchmal etwas gefälliger klingt. Aber Dein Englisch wird wirklich merklich sicherer und schöner!

Grüße
Duckduck

[choccy_hobnob]

Hallo! Deine Sätze waren ganz prima!

"I'm sorry for not getting in touch with you earlier. I think of you and my stay in P so often.
.... One can learn so much by working or even just by living among other in another culture. That's why I'm very (besser: "so") happy to have had this experience...

Now I have a lot of work at my (geht auch ohne "my") college at the moment. I have to make/give many (besser: "lots of") presentations in various/many different subjects, but I'm very glad about it, because it helps me to overcome my fear of speaking in front of many (besser: "large groups of") people and in this way I can learn getting past this fear. Was it difficult for you to work as a teacher and to stay/ propound have to speak in front of so many students?.....

He is surely happy about must already be looking forward to the holidays!(Er freut sich sicherlich schon jetzt auf die Ferien!)

Please give R. and him my best regards, please! (Bestelle bitte ihm und R. meine liebsten Grüße!)"


With best wishes,
Chloe

...Ach! Ich habe gerade gemerkt, dass der fantastische Duckduck mir knapp zuvor gekommen ist (verdammte langsame Finger!)! Ich schicke dir trotzdem meine Anmerkungen... two heads are better than one, heißt es!