Town- and countrylife

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Jerome

Town- and countrylife

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I live near the town cologne and i´m very happy that i don´t live on the country. Because if i live on the country i can´t going to shop when i want to go. Another problem is the dense road network beacause if you haven´t got a car you can´t go to the city whenever you want. But on the other hand on the country you can relax if you have a stressful daily grind. Wen you live in the town you can go shopping ,meet friends, go to the cinema whenever you want , and you can do many other nice things. But the town have bad sides too , you can´t relly relax if you don´t at home and it´s relly loudly beacuse of the whole busses car´s and trains. But my aducation is eventual that the townlife is more exciting that´s my opinion to the town- and countrylife.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Town- and countrylife

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Jerome hat geschrieben:I live near (the town) Cologne and I'm very happy that I don't live in the country. Because if I lived in the country, I couldn't/wouldn't be able to going to shopping whenever I wanted to go. Another problem is the dense road network (= dichtes Verkehrsnetz. Inwieweit ist das ein Problem? Du kannst doch den Bus oder die Bahn nehmen? Das Argument verstehe ich nicht) because if you haven't got a car you can't go to the city whenever you want to. But on the other hand, you can relax in the country if you have a stressful job. When you live in the town you can go shopping, meet friends, go to the cinema etc. whenever you want. But town life has some disadvantages too, you can't really relax if you aren't at home and it's really loudly because of/due to all the traffic. But eventually???, my aducation??? is that the town life is more exciting. That's my opinion about/concerning the town- and country life.
Hi Jerome, bitte schön!

Du bist ja noch recht frisch hier, deshalb ein, zwei freundliche Hinweise: Es ist schon ganz nett, wenn Du uns freiwillig Helfenden einen kleinen höflichen "Arbeitsauftrag" schreibst und nicht einfach einen - recht fehlerhaften - Text hinklatschst, ja?! Und bitte schaue Deinen Beitrag vor dem Posten auch selber noch auf Tippfehler durch, da waren eine ganze Reihe unnötiger Fehler drin, OK!

Grüße
Duckduck