Wäre nett wenn ihr mal rüberschaut, aber nicht lachen.......

[banditler]

Wäre nett wenn wieder mal jemand meinen Text liest und evtl. korrigiert .
Hoffe man kann ihn verstehen.


Viele Grüße Olli



Have you ever think about your body image?
Are you pleased with your body?
Or do you make diet every time?


I will tell you something about the body image.


A lot of girls and boys have problems with their body image today. They feel fat altough their body dimensions are correct. Those girls and boys have this mental illness, bulimia or anorexia.After the meal they feel sick and nasty. Often the people go to the cubicle and threw up. After that they feel better but this process is very precarious.


Why climb this cases?
Because the television and the mediums mediate the perfect body image. Every star is thin. every commercial break told the people that they must stay thin. And already children think about their body image. "You are what you eat! But always eat healthy and always eat few!" This is the public opinion.


I think every girl and boy must enjoy. Eating is live. You must eat balanced and healthy and you must exersice your body. Then your body keep well and fit and everything is fine. But be careful. Not so much and don´t overact. The middle is the correct way. And don´z hear of other people!

[joy]

Wäre nett wenn wieder mal jemand meinen Text liest und evtl. korrigiert .
Hoffe man kann ihn verstehen.


Viele Grüße Olli



Have you ever thought about your body shape?
Are you pleased with your body?
Or do you go on a diet every time and again?


I will tell you something about the body shape.


A lot of girls and boys have figure problems today. They feel fat although their body dimensions are correct. Those girls and boys suffer from an emotional eating disorder, called bulimia or anorexia. They eat too much and after the meal they feel sick and angry about it. Then those people often forces themselves to vomit. After that they feel better but this process is very precarious.


What causes bulimia?
The main reason is that the television and other media mediate the perfect body shape. Media lead many of us to believe that every star must be thin. Especially commercial breaks tell the people to have to be thin and to stay thin. And already children think about their body shape. "You are what you eat! But always eat healthy and always eat with moderation!" This is the public opinion.


I think every girl and boy must enjoy eating because eating is life. Have a balanced and healthy diet and exercise your body! Then your body keep well and fit and everything is fine. But be careful. Not too much and don´t overact. The middle is the correct way. And don't hear of those people who want you to look like a thin star!

Grüsse
joy

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Und die Ente watschelt auch nochmal hinterher...

Have you ever thought about your body shape? (vielleicht ist hier Körperwahrnehmung = body perception gemeint?)
Are you pleased with your body?
Or do you go on diets every time and again?


I would like to tell you something about the body shape/body perception.


A lot of girls and boys have weight problems today. They feel fat although their body dimensions are correct/quite alright. These girls and boys may in time develop an emotional eating disorder, called bulimia or anorexia. They eat too much and after the meal they feel sick and angry about it/themselves. So they go to the toilet and make themselves throw up. After that they feel better but this process is very precarious/dangerous.


Why do we have an increasing number of these cases?
The main reason is that the television and other media celebrate (ich denke, Du willst darauf hinaus, "mediate" ist mehr das Vermitteln zwischen Streitenden) the "perfect body shape". They make many of us believe that every star must be thin. Especially commercials tell and show us that we have to be thin and stay thin. Even children think about their body shape, nowadays. "You are what you eat! But always eat healthy food and always eat with moderation!" This is the public opinion.


I think every girl and boy should be able to enjoy eating, because eating is life. Have a balanced and healthy diet and exercise your body! Then you will keep fit and your body will stay in shape. But be careful. Not too much of anything and do not overdo it . The happy medium is the correct way. And do not listen to those who want you to look like a thin star!
Grüsse
joy

Grüße
Duckduck

[joy]

Hi Duckduck
Vielen Dank für die Mithilfe und die treffenden Worte! Sehr schön!

Gute Nacht
joy

[andy55]

Are you pleased with your body?

Would be my proposal: "Are you satisfied with your body?", in this context completely wrong?

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Are you pleased with your body?

Would my proposal:"Are you satisfied with your body?" be completely wrong in this context ?

Hi andy55, long time no see!!!
No, not at all, in fact I think it's even better than ours. Thanks! Just take a look at the word order in your sentence, OK?

CU
Duckduck

[choccy_hobnob]

Yup, andy55, I agree with Duckduck: good call! "Are you satisfied with your body?" and "Are you happy with your body?" are the two phrases I've heard most often in this context!

[andy55]

Thank you very much. But my present life is I am very upset and overtired. My word day begins at 2.00-3.00 am and ends at 18.00 p.m
I work seven days a week without a break since April this year. Saturday and Sunday about 3 hours.

My mother is 75 years old and yesterday I went to the hospital with her. The doctors said she would lost her eyesight, and you can certainly understand me, I am really:(

It is really hard to see her helplessness.
Her sense of sight is only 5-8 %!! and an operation is too late, because both optic nerves are in a very bad mood.
In this case an operation does not make sense and now we only can wait.

[banditler]

Hallo, danke für eure Hilfe, ihr habt mir sehr geholfen, habe den Text jetzt eingereicht, wenn ich ihn wiederhabe kann ich euch ja die Note sagen.
Body-image sollte Körperwahrnehming heißen.

Viele Grüße