My home town is cologne.I live in the town-part Widdersdorf since 15 years. Here i have my friends, my school and my hobbies.The downtown of cologne is very nice, here you can buy designerclothers and other good gears. There i buy almost of my clothes, because i like the mode of the cologne stores. Another good reason is the dense road network, because normaly the trains and the busses are driving every ten minutes. Let´s back to the downtown, there are many restaurants, cinemas and accecoires-shops, where you can buy funny things, the prettiest part of cologne is, to my mind, the south part of downtown. There are discos, cafes and many collations. Normaly every town has good sites and bad sites but at my home town i don´t find any bad things. That´s the reasons why i like my home town cologne.
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Jerome
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My home town
My home town is cologne.I live in the town-part Widdersdorf since 15 years. Here i have my friends, my school and my hobbies.The downtown of cologne is very nice, here you can buy designerclothers and other good gears. There i buy almost of my clothes, because i like the mode of the cologne stores. Another good reason is the dense road network, because normaly the trains and the busses are driving every ten minutes. Let´s back to the downtown, there are many restaurants, cinemas and accecoires-shops, where you can buy funny things, the prettiest part of cologne is, to my mind, the south part of downtown. There are discos, cafes and many collations. Normaly every town has good sites and bad sites but at my home town i don´t find any bad things. That´s the reasons why i like my home town cologne.

My home town is cologne.I live in the town-part Widdersdorf since 15 years. Here i have my friends, my school and my hobbies.The downtown of cologne is very nice, here you can buy designerclothers and other good gears. There i buy almost of my clothes, because i like the mode of the cologne stores. Another good reason is the dense road network, because normaly the trains and the busses are driving every ten minutes. Let´s back to the downtown, there are many restaurants, cinemas and accecoires-shops, where you can buy funny things, the prettiest part of cologne is, to my mind, the south part of downtown. There are discos, cafes and many collations. Normaly every town has good sites and bad sites but at my home town i don´t find any bad things. That´s the reasons why i like my home town cologne.
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joy
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My home town is Cologne. I have lived in the Widdersdorf district of Cologne since 15 years now. Here I have my friends, my school and my hobbies. The downtown of Cologne is very nice; here you can buy designer clothers and other good gears. There I buy almost all my clothes, because I like the mode of the Cologne stores. Another good reason for coming to this place is the dense road network, because the trains and the busses (BrE = buses) usually run every ten minutes. Let´s go back to the downtown; there are many restaurants, cinemas and accessory-shops (?), where you can buy funny things. The prettiest part of Cologne is, to my mind, the southern part of downtown. There are discos, cafés and many collations (snack bars?). Normally every town has its two sides but in my home town I don´t find any bad things. That's the reasons why I like my home town Cologne.
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Hi Jerome
Ortsnamen und Ich bzw. "I" immer gross schreiben!
Grüsse joy