Short letter about recommend a job (200words)

[Jefferson1992]

Hello,

I have a short text for you.

Would be nice, if you could improve my mistakes.

Thank you very much.



Hi Jan,

I hope your fine. Today it´s raining, so I decide to write you about my summer-job.

At the beginning it was very boring there, because I was all day in the office and answer phone-calls and I had to make coffee for my colleagues.

Eventually after two weeks of office work, I was allowed to translate music clips to improve my English. It was not very exciting, but better than making coffee all day. I was also allowed to evaluate and answer enquiries from English visitors.

At the end I was very glad to hear that I am going to visit a music festival, and that’s for free.

So at the beginning It was a bit boring, but from time to time it got better. And the Wages are very high, I couldn´t believe it, after I got my first payment.

So I would recommend the job for you, because you are listening to music very often, you can improve your English very well, and they pay much money.

I hope I could help you choosing your job. If you have more questions, then don´t be shy, and ask me. I will answer as soon as possible.

Best regards

[choccy_hobnob]

Hello,

I have a short text for you.

It would be nice, if you could improve my mistakes.

Thank you very much.

Hello!

Mal ein kleiner Hinweis vorab:

Das ist ein Akzent: `
Das ist ein Apostroph: '

Abgesehen davon war dein Text ziemlich gut: nur ein paar Anmerkungen von mir...

Hi Jan,

I hope you're fine (besser: "well"). Today it's raining, so I've decided to write you about my summer job. (Besser: "Since it's raining today, I've decided...")

At the beginning it was very boring there (oder: "It was very boring there at first"), because I was stuck all day in the office all day and had to answer phone calls and I had to make coffee for my colleagues.

Eventually, after two weeks of office work, I was allowed to translate music clips to improve my English. It was not very exciting, but better than making coffee all day. I was also allowed to evaluate and answer enquiries from English visitors.

At the end I was very glad to hear that I was going to visit a music festival, and that’s for free. Besser: "At the end of my time there, I was very pleased to find out that I was going to visit a music festival - for free!"

All in all, at the beginning it was a bit boring at the beginning, but it got better as time went by. And The wages are also very high: I couldn't believe it when I got my first payment!

Overall, I would recommend this job to you, because you are listening to a lot of music (oder: "because you like listening to music"), because it really helps to improve your English very well, and because they pay good/a lot of money.

I hope I could help you with choosing (oder: "to choose") a job. If you have more questions, then don't be shy, and ask me. I will answer as soon as possible.

Best regards

Sag einfach Bescheid, falls du weitere Erklärungen brauchst

[Jefferson1992]

dumme Frage aber ich muss sie stellen.

wie macht man mit einer Tastatur nen Apostroph?

ich amch das nämlich immer so ´ xD

und für den Rest erstmal Vielen Dank!

Als Anmerkung Ich bin LK Schüler, istd er Text dann immer noch gut?

[tiorthan]

Wenn du eine deutsche Tastatur hast (Deutschland, Österreich), dann findest du den Apostroph auf der Raute-Taste # indem du die Umschalttaste drückst.
Wenn du eine schweizer Tastatur hast, dann findest du den Apostroph auf der gleichen Taste wie das Fragezeichen indem du die Umschalttaste nicht drückst.