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julius95

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:)Hallo.Ich schreibe Montag einen newspaper report.Ich habe jetzt über einen text aus mein Englischbuch ein newspaper report geschrieben.Wäre nett wenn ihr den report berichtigt :). Two years loneliness for a 1000 year old tree.
Julia Buterfly lived for two years on a tree. She protested against the Maxxam Corporation, because they wanted to cut down the tree.The Maxxam Corporation gave Julia Butterfly a payment of $50.000 and they promised, that the 1000 years old tree will be preserve in an area of 60 meters. That was the reason, why Julia finished her life at the red wood tree. Two years ago, she climed on the tree and build up on 55 meters a platform. It was a protest against logging. She never come down in this time. When she wants to give Interviews she does it with her mobilephone. Julia said, that she never get any feet on the ground until the people understand, why she was protesting.Ich hoffe mal das ich nicht zu viele Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler in den text rein gehauen haben.mfg :)

Jefferson1992

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Two years of loneliness for ("on" (siehe P.S.)) a 1000 year old tree.

Julia Butterfly lived on a tree for two years. She protested against the Maxxam Corporation, because they wanted to cut down the tree.

The Maxxam Corporation gave Julia Butterfly a payment of $50.000 and they promised that the 1000 year old tree would be protected in an area of 60 meters.
That is the reason, why Julia finished her life on the red wood tree.
Two years ago, she climbed on the tree and built up a platform on 55 meters, because she protested against logging. Since then, she never come down from the tree, even if there were people, who wanted to interview her, she gave interviews only by mobilephone.
Julia often said, that she won't put any feet on the ground, till the people understand, why she is protesting.

Best regards

Chris

PS:

Die Überschrift macht irgendwie keinen Sinn, wieso ist der Baum 2 Jahre einsam gewesen?
Wolltest du schreiben, dass die Julia 2 Jahre einsam auf dme Baum war?