Help me, please!

[Chloe]

Hello!
Could you have a look at my text and correct it please?

"It was my second time in H. and I feel that I became more and more attached to H. and their people. I've just read that the h. people one the friendly nation in the world and total agree with it...
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I'm so glad that you gave me an opportunity to learn something from you and found even time to explain some things whereby you were so busy and had a lot of things to do.
I really appreciate it.
In two weeks I'm going to do an prasentation at my college about my internship. I was asked to show a couple of pictures of the school..."

Thank you!!!

Regards,
Chloe

[choccy_hobnob]

Hello!
Could you have a look at my text and correct it please?

Natürlich Nur ein paar Anmerkungen...

"It was my second time in H., during which I became more and more attached to H. and their ("their" oder "its"? Hängt davon ab, ob "H." in der Mehrzahl steht oder nicht) people. I've just read that the H. people are one of the friendliest nations in the world, and totally agree with this!

I'm so glad that you gave me an opportunity to learn something from you and found even found the time to explain some things to me, whereby even though you were very busy and had a lot of things to do.
I really appreciate it.
In two weeks I'm going to do an presentation at my college about my internship. I was asked to show a couple of pictures of the school..."

Thank you!!!

Regards,
Chloe