Notizen für Kurzreferat korrigieren

[Bäumchen]

Hallo,
ich muss ein Kurzreferat über Waldsterben halten und habe mir dafür ein paar Notizen aufgeschrieben.Allerdings bin ich in Englisch leider sehr schlecht und deshalb wäre es lieb wenn jemand nochmal die gröbsten Fehler finden würde

Dying of forests

Introduction

-30 % of the german area are woods
-was in the 80s a current topic:in 20 years woods will died
-20 years later: almost no one is interested on the topic of the dying forests
-but:necessary for our life ,because they proctudes oxygen( Sauerstoff)

A pair of causes:

1. air pollution: -cars and factories produce polltutans :e.x.:sulfor dioxide
   -polltutans comes with the rain as “acid rain” on the land
   
   2.to much nitrogen (stickstoff):
   
   -come from farmers :-trough factory farming(means –to much animals one one place)
   -put on their fields to much nutrients (Nährstoffe)
   
   -trees grows up to quickley-but roots (Wurzeln) are not ready: storms kill the trees easier
   
   3..insect:
   -ill trees can not resist against the insect
   
   -e.x:bark beetle (Borkenkäfer)-can kill whole forests
   
   What can we do against?
   
   -put calcium over the trees against acid rain
   -do not have factory farming
   -reduce the pollution from cars and factorys
   -do not fly if it is not necessary and use more often our bike

[Chuckle]

Ich sage ganz ehrlich, dass es schwierig ist, Notizen zu korrigieren. Es soll dir ja selber helfen. Inhaltlich ist es vllt, richtig.

[Bäumchen]

Ich sage ganz ehrlich, dass es schwierig ist, Notizen zu korrigieren. Es soll dir ja selber helfen. Inhaltlich ist es vllt, richtig.

Ja,ich denke da hast du wirklich recht,deshalb habe ich jetzt das ganze einmal in Textform geschrieben.Es wäre lieb,wenn jemand sich auf Fehlersuche begeben würde .
Dying of forests

Dying of forests is a important topic for our planet.30 percent of the German area are woods.
In the 80s was the dying of forests a current topic ,because the media said in 20 years all trees will be died.But now 20 years later almost no one is interested oft he danger for our forests ,altough the trees are necessary for our life, because they proctudes oxygen.The woods are also home to many animals.
A lot of caueses are responsible for dying of our forest but the most guess causes are the air polltution,the too much nitrogen in land and the insects.
Cars and factories produce pollutans like for example sulfor dioxide.They comes with the rain as “acid rain” on the land.The ill trees can not resist against insects like the bark beetle,which can kill whole forests . Trough factory farming and putting on their fields too much nutrients farmers fertilize the soil and the trees grow up too quickley,but the roots are not even ready.This is tragic ,cause the next storm blow over the trees.
If we human want to keep our woods,we have to pay attention to them.
There are possibilites every people can note.
Why take the car if you can use your bike?
Why drive an enviromentally unfriendly car if you can buy a more environmentally car ? Why buy meat from facory farming if you can eat happy pigs from free range?.
How ever more and more trees are dying and a lot of animals lost their home .
It is time time to act!