Hilfe bei Fragen beantworten

[saturn]

Hallo noch mal miteinander. Habe die weiteren Fragen fertig beantwortet. Weiß mal wieder nich, ob da was nicht stimmt. Und eher ich Fehler mache, frage ich noch mal nach.

1.Beschreibe die Aspekte, die ihr Leben unangenehm machen.

Anzia must work hard in a clothing factory. She describes how it is. Everywhere is noise, the machines are too loud and she's unhappy. Anzia came to America because she wants to have a better life but it seems that she often cries because she not wanted to stayon a machine the whole life. She wanted to do someting out her life. Anzia has the feeling that she had waste the time of her life She notices that the United States only need her hands but they needn't her heart and mind. Her work seem to be very hard and unjust.

2.
Anzia thinks about her future. She wishs herself a beautiful future. Anzia describes her thoughts and feelings in her delection of autobiographical stories, Hungry Hearts. She writes that she wants to do something out her person and her life. She wants to change something in her present life. Anzia believes too, that her present work only is the beginning and she wants to find a better work and Anzia believes in her chance in America.

3.Erkläre anzias und Yettas Haltungen.

Anzia had the dream to find a better life in America. Therefore she came to the United States. But she noticed fast that it isn't so how it was in her dreams.She noticed that this country only need her body and hands but not her thoughts and feelings. During the other are happy ,she isn't happy. Anzia wants more. She wants not to work in the sweatshop prison the whole time.
Yetta is happy that she is able to work in the sweatshop because she didn't go to school ever. She came to America because she wanted to go to school. She wanted learn, think and do something out her life. Yetta believes that the American-born have more chance for a good work and future as the immigrants.

Würde hier bitte jemand korrigieren?Bin mir unsicher
Vielen Dank

[joy]

Hallo noch mal miteinander. Habe die weiteren Fragen fertig beantwortet. Weiß mal wieder nicht, ob da was nicht stimmt. Und eher ich Fehler mache, frage ich noch mal nach.

1.Beschreibe die Aspekte, die ihr Leben unangenehm machen.

Anzia must work hard in a clothing factory. She describes how it is. Everywhere there is so much noise, the machines are too loud and she's unhappy. Anzia came to America because she wants to have a better life but it seems that she often cries because she did not wanted to stay on a machine the whole life. She wanted to make something of her life. Anzia has the feeling that she had wasted the time of her life. She realizes that the United States only need her hands but they needn't her heart and mind. Her work seems to be very hard and unjust.

2. (müsste hier nicht Yetta statt Anzia stehen?)
Anzia thinks about her future. She wishes herself a bright future. Anzia describes her thoughts and feelings in her selection of autobiographical stories, Hungry Hearts. She writes that she wants to change something in her present life. She wants to make something of herself and her way of life. Anzia also believes that her current job would only be a springboard for finding a better job and Anzia believes in her chance in America.

3.Erkläre Anzias und Yettas Haltungen.

Anzia had the dream to find a better life in America. Therefore she came to the United States. But she has quickly realized that it isn't so as it was in her dreams. She noticed that this country only needs her body and hands but not her thoughts and feelings. All the others are happy, but she isn't happy at all. Anzia wants more. She doesn't wants to work in the sweatshop prison the whole time.
Yetta, however, is happy that she is able to work in the sweatshop because she had never gone to school before. She came to America because she wanted to go to school. She wanted to learn, think and make something of her life. Yetta believes that the American-born have more chance for a good job with better future prospects as the immigrants.

Würde hier bitte jemand korrigieren?Bin mir unsicher
Vielen Dank

[saturn]

Danke joy für die Hilfe. Die Korrektur werde ich mir ausdrucken und nachher in aller Ruhe lesen.Helfe meiner Mum heute in der Kita bei der Tag der offenen Tür.