Ich muss in Englisch eine Kurzgeschichte vollenden. Jedoch habe ich bei solchen Aufgaben immer sehr viel Schwierigkeiten mit der englischen Grammatik. Darum brauche ich eure Hilfe.
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Anmerkungen: Me = a little Girl Peter = my father
Tar = David
„Peter“ mom mumble „what´s that you said“ and stare at my father. „You have to go to Davids father, you have to settle the situation!” she continued. “I know” my father returns and leave the room. Meanwhile I sit in my bad crying and try to call Tar again and again. But nothing only the mailbox.
Later this day my father came totally outraged and pale faced back. Mom, send me back to my room. My parents rush into the livingroom and slam the door in my face. I stay at the door to eavesdrop whats happened but I could not get some. After 15 minutes I go to my room totally demotivated. Thousands of questions running throw my head “Whats happened?”, “Where was my father gone?”, “Whats happened with my father?” and above all “Where is Tar?”
The atmosphere in my Family turns cold no one talk with me about this theme. Every time I ask my parents they give me no answer. After 3 Days of unsuspecting my mom came to my room and told me whats happened.
My father drove to Davids house. After reaching it he heard loud noises. In the Next moment David with a bloody nose and his father following him appear. My father jumped out of his car to save David and to stop his father. After a short fight my father pull David into his car and drove away. They drove to the youth welfare department.
“David is safe now” My mom told me. I never see Tar again.
Ich freue mich sehr über jede art von Hilfe!!
Und nun,
vamos!!!
