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Svenja09

Bitte korrigieren Daaannkkee :D

Beitrag von Svenja09 »

Hallo,
wir sollten in Englisch so einen Text zusammen fassen, er hat keine Überschrift und nix,
bräuchte nur eure Hilfe, dass man mal drüber schaut, weil ich gern mal grammatische
Fehler mache.
Vielen Dank
The European show a admiration for the Aborigines „primitive“ vitality. Charles Darwin saw the bleak future on his visit to Australia. He was amazed about the sagacity in tracking animals and he saw the harmful influnce of European civilisation on the Australien continent. The Aboriginies were banned to a lower category of human development, bacause they do not build houses etc.
Thus the Aboriginies were from the people to an extinct group because nobody can remember.


On the other hand the European hegemony were rerated. One confronted questions about the anthropologicial disctriction beween primitive and advanced societies.
But the Aborigines had not the skill required to build aeroplanes. They sociality mattered more then material property. They spent there time on conversation, story-telling and rituals.

Danke :D


joy

Re: Bitte korrigieren Daaannkkee :D

Beitrag von joy »

Svenja09 hat geschrieben:Hallo,
wir sollten in Englisch so einen Text zusammen fassen, er hat keine Überschrift und nix,
bräuchte nur eure Hilfe, dass man mal drüber schaut, weil ich gern mal grammatische
Fehler mache.
Vielen Dank
The European shows an admiration for the Aborigines' „primitive“ vitality. Charles Darwin saw the bleak future on his visit to Australia. He was amazed about the sagacity in tracking animals and he saw the harmful influence of European civilisation on the Australian continent. The Aborigines were banned to a lower category of human development, bacause they did not build houses etc.
Thus the Aborigines were from the people to an extinct group because nobody can remember. (Verstehe den Satz nicht)

On the other hand the European hegemony was rerated. One confronted questions about the anthropologicial disctraction between primitive and advanced societies. (Verstehe ich nicht - vielleicht: One confronted anthropologicial questions about the disctraction between primitive and advanced societies?)
But the Aborigines had not the skill required to build aeroplanes. Their sociality counted more then material property. They spent their time on conversation, story-telling and rituals. (Ich sehe den Zusammenhang nicht bei den letzen beiden Sätzen)

Danke :D




Liebe Grüsse
joy