Please help me!

[Chloe]

Hello!

Could you correct please my email!

Thank you so much!

With my wishes,
Chloe


Sehr geehrte Frau …,

bezüglich meiner E-Mails vom 23.09.2010 wegen des Praktikums an Ihre Schule möchte ich ergänzen, dass ich Ende letzter Woche für den Zeitraum vom 11.10.2010 bis zum 29.10.2010 einen Englisch-Intensivkurs an Ihrem Institut in K. gebucht habe. Außerdem wäre ich weiterhin sehr an einem Praktikum an Ihrer Schule interessiert. Ich wäre Ihnen daher sehr verbunden, wenn ich ein Praktikum jeweils nach dem Unterricht am Nachmittag absolvieren könnte.


Vielen Dank und mit freundlichen Grüßen,



Dear Ms …,



With regard to my e-mails from the 9/23/2010 because of the internship at your school I would like to complement that I have booked an English intensiv course in your institute in K. in the end of the last week for the period of the 10/11/2010 up to the 10/29/2010. Moreover, I would be interested furthermore very much in a training period at your school. I would be glad to you very much if I could finish an internship in each case after the lessons in the afternoon.





Many thanks and yours sincerely,

[Delfino]

Dear Ms …,

I sent you an e-mail on the 23th September 2010 in regard to an internship at your school
and now I'd like to add a few details. Maybe you have already noticed that I booked an English
intensive course at your institute in Cologne from the 11th Oct. 2010 to the 29th Oct. 2010.
Moreover, I am very interested in further training at your school. Therefore I would welcome
the opportunity to finish my work related to the internship ( in the afternoon )
after my lessons are finished.

Yours sincerely,
Chloe

An internship is usually paid work to gain work experience and rather different to an apprenticeship.