wer hat Lust, einen kurzen Text korrektur zu lesen.

[glani]

dies ist auch kein langer Text, wäre für jede Hilfe dankbar

Living on the streets involves a lot of problems and dangers which reflect in hunger, abuse and violence. Most of the kids who live on the streets remain at dangerous places like the station or the drug scene. To survive many street children do illegal activities like stealing, drug dealing and prostitution. For some it is a vicious circle between taking drugs and prostitution. Also there are sanitary risks for the kids. Breathing in exhausts, sleeping outside and few possibilities of keeping clean result in illnesses. Another problem for the kids could be that some of them aren’t able to read or write and so they never will find a job, maybe.

[caro64]

dies ist auch kein langer Text, wäre für jede Hilfe dankbar

Living on the streets involves a lot of problems and dangers which reflect in hunger, abuse and violence. Most of the kids who live on the streets remain hang around at dangerous places like the train stations or the drug scene. In order to survive, many street children do illegal activities like (break the law by) stealing, drug dealing and prostitution. For some it is a vicious circle between taking drugs and prostitution. Also There are also sanitary risks for the kids. Breathing in exhausts fumes, sleeping outside and with few (hardly any) possibilities of keeping clean, result in illnesses. Another problem for the kids could be (is) that some of them aren’t able to read or write and so they never will find a job, maybe. (finding a job would be extremely difficult if not impossible)

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