textzusammenfassung über altersbeschränkungen

[frim08]

Hallo.
Ich soll in der Schule eine Tabelle zusammenfassen, die Altersbeschränkungen darstellt.
Vielen dank schonmal für die Korretkur.

First of all the chart shows the age limits, when you're allowed to do something, for example driving a car or beginning to work.
In the comparison to the USA and Germany, Pakistan often deflects.
To my mind the age limit of leaving school is bad, because the children in Pakistan you don't have a compulsory to go to school.
The law, when you can go to work, is nearly the same in all countries.
You'll break a law in Pakistan, if you have when you aren't married, because they have no age of consent.
You have the legal right to marry with 18 years, but the female Pakistan can marry with the age of 16 and in my opinion this is really unimportant.
In the USA a 14 aged human can drive a car, what is really new to me.
I was suprised to see that you shouldn't buy alcohol in Pakistan, because it's illegal for all and there the most differences in the different countries.
The littlest comparisons in all 3 countries are the privileges in smoking and voting in an election.
you can do this at the age of 18.
It's a good law, that we aren't responsible for criminal actions not until the age of 14, because when you're younger you can't take the responsibility for what you've done, because you can't realize it.
I don't think 6 is an apprpriate age to take somebody to court, because they should be protected.
I think it should be up to at least 12 years.
All in all in Germany we have the best laws and I'm really happy with that.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo.
Ich soll in der Schule eine Tabelle zusammenfassen, die Altersbeschränkungen darstellt.
Vielen Dank schon mal für die Korrektur.

First of all, the chart shows the different age limits for certain actions in three countries: the USA, Germany and Pakistan. In other words, it illustrates at what age people in these countries are allowed to do things like driving cars or taking on a job.

It is interesting to note that compared to the limits of Germany and the USA, Pakistan's age limits are quite often extremely different.
To my mind, for example, the age limit for leaving school is negative, because the children in Pakistan you do not seem to have a compulsory education.
The age limit for going to work is nearly the same in all countries.
A considerable difference is that you break a law in Pakistan if you have carnal intercourse (das s-Wort wird hier nicht gedruckt) without being married, because they have no age of consent.
You have the legal right to marry with 18 years, but the female Pakistani can get married at the age of 16 and in my opinion this is really unimportant/no big difference.

In the USA, a 14-year-old is allowed to drive a car, which really surprised me.
It was also news to me that you must not buy alcohol in Pakistan, because it is illegal for everyone. This is the most important difference between the three countries.
However, in all three countries people are allowed the privileges of smoking and voting in an election at the age of 18.

It is a good law that in Germany we are not responsible for criminal actions not until the age of 14, because when you are younger you cannot take the responsibility for what you have done, because you do not realize it. (Nun, darüber könnte man diskutieren...)
I do not think 6 is an appropriate/adequate age to take somebody to court, because they should be protected. (In welchem Land ist das denn so?)
I think the age limit should be raised to at least 12 years.

All in all, in Germany we have the best laws and I am really happy about that.

So, ganz schön bunt, nöch? Mach Dir nichts draus, das sind hauptsächlich Ausdruckskorrekturen. Von denen sollst Du lernen. Kurzformen (don't, I'm usw.) nicht in formellen Texten verwenden.

Frage gerne nach, wenn Du die Korrekturen nicht verstehst, ja?!

Grüße
Duckduck