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[Buffy666]

In my holidays I worked for Mc Café at the airport and from the beginning on it was planed that my last day would be Thurdsay. So I planned to meet friends on my free days and to pack before I would fly on Wednesday to the Dominican Republic for 14 days. Two days before my free days the new plan was published and I saw that I had to work also on the weekend and on Monday. I talked to my chef and he pleased me to work and so I did. So I didnt see all of my friends before my holidays and packed one day before the flight. But I didnt forget anything.


My best experience in my holidays was in the Dominican Republic two weeks ago. It was six o clock in the morning and my boyfriend woke me up. I was really tired and didnt want to stand up. It wasnt planed to stand up so early and I wanted to continue sleeping. But he took my hand and said he wants to show me something. I got up and we went to the beach. The whole sky was so beautiful and rose. He took a towel with him and we set on the towel on a sun bed. We watched how the sky was turning yellow with red and blue and how the sun arose. It was really romantic and a beautiful moment and I was fascinated from the scene in front of my and happy that I got up. We went a little bit on the beach and saw a little turtle fighting with the waves and a few seconds it was on the beach and then it jumped back into the sea. It was really small and cute and it was a wonderful moment to stand on a beautfiul white beach with palms, hand in hand with my boyfriend who I love with the wonderful sky in front of me and watching this little turtle.

Ja..ich glaub die Grammatik passt nicht so ganz, würd mich freuen, wenn das wer verbessern könnte =)


Danke im Voraus

[joy]

During my holidays I worked for Mc Café at the airport and from the beginning on it was planned that my last day would be Thursdsay. So I planned to meet friends on my free days and to pack before I would fly on Wednesday to the Dominican Republic for 14 days. Two days before my free days the new timetable had already been published and I saw that I had to work also on the weekend and on Monday. I talked to my chef and he asked me to work and so I did. Consequently, I didn't see all of my friends before my holidays and packed one day before the flight. But I didn't forget anything.


My best experience during my holidays was in the Dominican Republic two weeks ago. It was six o' clock in the morning and my boyfriend woke me up. I was really tired and didn't want to get up. It wasn't planned to get up so early and I wanted to continue sleeping. But he took my hand and said he wants to show me something. I got up and we went to the beach. The whole sky was so beautiful and rosé (or: pink). He took a towel with him and we set on the towel on a sunbed. We watched how the sky was turning yellow with red and blue and how the sun arose. It was really romantic and a beautiful moment and I was fascinated by the scene in front of me and happy that I had got up. We went a little bit on the beach and saw a little turtle fighting with the waves and a few seconds it was on the beach and then it jumped back into the sea. It was really small and cute and it was a wonderful moment to stand on a beautifiul white beach with palms, hand in hand with my boyfriend who I love enjoying, the wonderful sky in front of me and watching this little turtle.

Ja..ich glaub die Grammatik passt nicht so ganz, würd mich freuen, wenn das wer verbessern könnte =)


Danke im Voraus

Eigentlich ganz schön, wären da nicht die vielen Flüchtigkeitsfehler, die nicht notwendig wären.
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joy