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[leo91]

I've been in relationship with my boyfriend since one and a half year and I'm the only child form my mum and dad. I live in a small village, which called ... . It's far away form ... . There are only little shops, like Edeka, penny bank or bakery. But I like this village and I never want to live in a big city. I would only stay there for a few weeks and then I need the good old country air.
I live in a big house with my parents. I've got my own appartement with a bath- and bedroom, kitchen and living room. The best in my rooms are the leo-print on the walls or in a few pictures.
I have three maine-coon-cats and one "normal" cat. The called Bon Jovi, Kira, Bingo and Coco. Coco like Coco Chanel.
I made my apprenticeship at the ... since september last year. I visite a lot of stations in this year, like local health authority, Call Center, further education college and personal management. At the moment I have my place at the personal management for three months.
My last vacation was last year. I travel to Mallorca/Ballermann. Tigether with my cousine, I stayed there for only one week. It was the greatest vacation I ever had. One night, I was on stage with Jürgen Drews and we saw Mickie Krause, Michael Wendler and "Frauenarzt". The beach was very nice and we had a very luxury hotel.
My hobbies are riding a horse, sleeping, going shopping, going to the cinema and meeting my friends. My biggest hobby is my boyfriend.
I would live with the hippies, because everything is coold and easy. Or in the year 1920, because there are so great ol d cars.
The people, who I admire most are my parents. They are very great persons. We have a lot of fun and they have always "an open ear" for me and my problems. The doesn't had always an easy time, but they never had forget to laugh.
I wish I get a good job with a lot of money, a nice man and a few sweet children with a big house. Everything should be good!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi leo91 und willkommen im Forum!

My name is ... and I'm my parents' only child (oder: an only child). I've been going out with my boyfriend for one and a half years. I live in a small village called ... . It's not? far away from ... . There are only a few little shops here, like Edeka, penny bank??(Name?, dann groß schreiben) or a bakery. But I like this village and I never want to live in a big city. I wouldn't mind staying there for a few weeks but then I need the good old country air.
I live in a big house with my parents. I've got my own appartement with a bathroom, a bedroom, a kitchen and a living room. The best thing about my rooms are the leo-prints (wallpaper??) on the walls and in a few pictures.
I have three Maine-Coon cats and one "normal" cat. They are called Bon Jovi, Kira, Bingo and Coco, named after Coco Chanel.
I did / served an apprenticeship at the ... until September last year. I visited a lot of stations??? (hier weiß ich nicht, was Du meinst, weil ich ja nicht weiß, was für eine Ausbildung Du gemacht hast) during this year, like the local health authority, a call center, a college for further education and personal management (What kind of a job is that?).
At the moment I'm working at the personal management (s.o.) for three months.
My last vacation (AmE) / holiday (BrE) was last year. I travelled to Mallorca/Ballermann. Together with my cousine, I stayed there for only one week. It was the greatest vacation (s.o.) I ever had. One night, I was on stage with Jürgen Drews and we saw Mickie Krause, Michael Wendler and "Frauenarzt". The beach was very nice and we stayed in a very luxurious hotel.
My hobbies are horse riding, sleeping, going shopping, going to the cinema and meeting my friends. My biggest hobby is my boyfriend.
I would like to live with the hippies, because everything about them is/was coold and easy (das muss ich nicht verstehen, oder?). Or in the year 1920, because there were / they had these so great old cars then.
The people, who I admire most are my parents. They are very great people. We have a lot of fun and they always have a sympathetic ear for me and my problems. Life was not always kind to them, but they never lost their good humour, never forgot to laugh.
I wish I will eventually find a good job and earn a lot of money. I could buy a big house then, in which I could live with a nice man / husband and a couple of sweet children. Everything should be good then!

So, da war ja doch das eine oder andere Fehlerlein drin. Wenn Du Fragen hast, scheue Dich nicht...

Cheers
Duckduck