Help me to correct this text, please!

[Chloe]

Hello!
Could you correct this text, please?

"...Are you enjoying autumn? I really like this season. Maybe because I don't stand a lot of sun or maybe I like it for its colours and rain.
I was in B. two years ago and I have very nice memories of this city. You're right, there's a lot of life and history in S. I was also in C. and G. Have you ever been there? I like travelling. It gives one more freedom... I've just written it and I'm thinking now why I did it. I was born in the state where people had to manage difficulties if they wanted to go abroad. Maybe that's why I was really thirsty of travelling and this is one of the reasons why I've been studying so long.
But now I'm focused on my apprenticeship. I'm learning E., S. and G. There're also political sciences, religion, data processing(Datenverarbeitung), economy and accounting. It's quite interessant and difficult, but I hope I can bring it off.
....You're a teacher and you know what people need to speak E. fluently. So you know how to learn something. Maybe you can practise with your s. students. How is your school going? I miss learning there. I've never thought that it could be so fun! (I hatte nie gedacht, dass das so viel Spaß machen kann) I don't know what it was that did the trick...
I wrote you about an I. movie, which I wanted to watch. It's called "...". Although it won an Oscar I have never heard about it before. Have you seen it? Thank you for your tips for movies! I'm going to borrow or buy the movies "..." and "...". I'd like to watch the movie "..." on this weekend. I can recommend you the movie "...". It's not easy, but very tief. I was a little bit shocked and delighted at the same time."

Thank you!
With best wishes,
Chloe

[joy]

Hello!
Could you correct this text, please?

"...Are you enjoying autumn? I really like this season. Maybe because I don't stand a lot of sun or maybe I like it for its colours and rain.
I was in B. two years ago and I have very nice memories of this city. You're right, there's a lot of life and history in S. I was also in C. and G. Have you ever been there? I like travelling. It gives one more freedom... I've just written it and I'm thinking now why I did it. I was born in that state where people had to manage difficulties if they wanted to go abroad. Maybe that's why I was really thirsty of travelling and this is one of the reasons why I've been studying so long.
But now I'm focused on my apprenticeship. I'm learning E., S. and G. There're also political sciences, religion, data processing OK (Datenverarbeitung), economy and accounting. It's quite interesting and difficult as well, but I hope I can bring it off.
....You're a teacher and you know what people need to speak E. fluently. So you know how to learn something. Maybe you can practise with your s. students. How is your school going? I miss learning there. I'd never thought that it could be so fun! (Hier bin ich nicht ganz sicher) (Ich hatte nie gedacht, dass das so viel Spaß machen kann) I don't know what it was that did the trick...
I wrote you about an I. movie, which I wanted to watch. It's called "...". Although it won an Oscar I have never heard about it before. Have you seen it? Thank you for your tips for movies! I'm going to borrow or buy the movies (or: them)"..." and "...". I'd like to watch the movie"..." on this weekend. I can recommend you the movie to you"...". It's not easy, but very tief. I was a little bit shocked and delighted at the same time."

Thank you!
With best wishes,
Chloe

Grüsse von
joy

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hello!
Could you correct this text, please?

"...Are you enjoying autumn? I really like this season. Maybe because I can'tstand a lot of sun or maybe I like it for its colours and rain.
I was in B. two years ago and I have very nice memories of this city. You're right, there's a lot of life and history in S. I was also in C. and G. Have you ever been there? I like travelling. It gives one the feeling offreedom... Now thatI've just written it down it sets methinking now why I did it. I was born in a countrywhere people had to overcomedifficulties if they wanted to go abroad. Maybe that's why I was really keen ontravelling and this is one of the reasons why I've been studying / I studied for so long. (Chloe, studierst Du jetzt noch? Ich dachte, Du machst eine Ausbildung. Wenn das Studium zu Ende ist, musst Du hier Past tense nehmen.)
But now I'm focused on my apprenticeship. I'm learning E., S. and G. There are (in diesem Fall wird keine Kurzform gebildet - Aussprechbarkeit) also political sciences, religion, data processing, economy and accounting. It's quite interesting and difficult as well, but I hope I can bring it off.
....You're a teacher and you know what people need to speak E. fluently. So you know how to learn something. Maybe you can practise with your s. students. How is your school going? I miss learning there. I would have never thought that learning could be so much fun! I don't know what it was that did the trick...
I wrote you about an I. movie, which I wanted to watch. It's called "...". Although it won an Oscar I had never heard about it before. Have you seen it? Thank you for your tips for movies! I'm going to borrow or buy the movies "..." and "...". I'd like to watch the movie"..." at the weekend. I can recommend you the movie "..." to you. It's not easy to follow, but very profound. I was both a little bit shocked and delighted when I watched it.

Thank you!
With best wishes,
Chloe



Grüsse von
joy

Und Grüße von Duckduck hinterher

[joy]

Wow, very good Duckduck.
Ich hoffe, dass Chloe dies gesehen hat.

Schönes Wochenende!
joy

[Chloe]

Thank you so much to both of you!!!


With best wishes,
Chloe