Bitte einmal drübersehen "space program"

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joopa

Bitte einmal drübersehen "space program"

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Hi zusammen,

ich haben den folgenden Text verfasst und wäre über eine Korrektur sehr dankbar.
Schon mal danke und grüße an alle.

"Other scientists consider that the manned space program is invaluable, because the space is a unique laboratory where humans can do primary tests, which they can't reproduce on Earth.
Since the human race have been thinking the desire for discovering and researching the space is very huge.
The moving power is the thirst for knowledge.

"Some scientists question the scientific payoff of manned space mission, bcause they have the opinion that the missions are too expensive and risky.
They think that unmanned probes and robots could do most of the experiments in the space."

caro64

Re: Bitte einmal drübersehen "space program"

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joopa hat geschrieben:Hi zusammen,

ich haben den folgenden Text verfasst und wäre über eine Korrektur sehr dankbar.
Schon mal danke und grüße an alle.

"Other scientists consider that the manned space program is invaluable, because the space is a unique laboratory where humans can do carry out primary tests, tests which theycan't be reproduced on Earth.
Since the human race have been thinking the desire for discovering and researching the space is very huge.
The moving power is the thirst for knowledge. (? Verstehe ich leider nicht )


"Some scientists question the scientific payoff, of the manned space mission, bcause they have (share) the opinion that the missions are too expensive and too risky.
They think that unmanned probes and robots could do (are able to carry out) most of the experiments in the space."

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Bitte einmal drübersehen "space program"

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caro64 hat geschrieben:
joopa hat geschrieben:Hi zusammen,

ich haben den folgenden Text verfasst und wäre über eine Korrektur sehr dankbar.
Schon mal danke und grüße an alle.

"Other scientists consider that the manned space program is invaluable, because the space is a unique laboratory where humans can do carry out primary tests, tests which theycan't be reproduced on Earth.
Since the human race have been thinking the desire for discovering and researching the space is very huge.
The moving power is the thirst for knowledge. (? Verstehe ich leider nicht )

Huhu Caro,

ich nehme an, es ist sowas gemeint wie:
"Ever since humankind learned to think logically, the desire for discovering and researching the space has been huge. The thirst for knowledge is the moving power behind all human scientific ambition."



"Some scientists question the scientific payoff of the manned space mission, because they have (share) the opinion that the missions are too expensive and too risky.
They think that unmanned probes and robots could do (are able to carry out) most of the experiments in the space."
Grüßerle
Duckduck

joopa

Re: Bitte einmal drübersehen "space program"

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Hi Duckduck,

genauso soll es heißen, danke für die Hilfe.