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Bitte bitte korrigieren

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Hallo zusammen,

ich musste hier einige Fragen zu einem Text beantworten, nur leider haben meine grammatikalischen Fähigkeiten ziemlich abgenommen.. bzw. waren nie wirklich gut :| .. aber villeicht könntet ihr ja einen Blick über meine Ergebnisse werfen und mich auf Fehler aufmerksam machen!

Vielen Dank schonmal!!!



1. How did Christopher amass such an enormous amount of debts?

A: His financial issue began when he didn’t tell the truth about his personal facts on applying for a credit from a financial institution. After he got that credit, he started to spent that plastic money wastefully into a vast amount of needless things. Much to his regret he fell quickly into a hole of debts and wasn’t able to climb out of that cave on his own.



2. Who helped him to stop making more debts?

A: Christopher’s mother helped him out to stop making more debts. She destroyed his credit cards in order to avoid that her son gets into more trouble.



3. What is Christopher’s current employment?

A: Christopher currently works as a steward on a cross-channel ferry.

I wouldn’t like to work as a steward like Christopher, but if I were in his position with his credit issue I would probably do the job, just to pay off those debts.



4. Why is it difficult for Christopher to pay back his debts?

A: In his occupation he earns only about 150 pounds a week and on the contrary there is the debt which exceeds his weekly income to a considerable degree. Without the help of his parents he wouldn’t be able to bear the resulting amount.



5. What, according to Christopher’s mother, will be the negative consequences if teenagers borrow such high sums of money?

A: Christopher’s mother is afraid that those credit companies will soon create a generation of people who aren’t able to mange their liquid assets and become independent from their parents.



6. Why has it become so easy for teenagers to get a credit card?

A: The competition on the credit market has risen rapidly. The only problem is that new companies haven’t all the necessary security precautions needed to prevent that sophisticated youngsters can obtain a credit.



7. According to the Credit Card Research Group, what is the main reason why young people get into debt so easily?

A: The main reason stated by the Credit Card Research Group for this matter, is that most of young people aren’t capable to deal with money. A shortcoming in a proper handling with funds seems like the difficulty of their typical behaviour.



8. When seeking help from organisations like the Credit Card Research Group, what are the chances and dangers?

A: The dangers of seeking help from an organisation like the Credit Card Research Group are that young people could get into serious trouble because of their dishonesty on completion of the contract. Due to their criminal offence there is a risk of a prosecution. On the other hand they have a chance to become afloat, because they weren’t old enough to sign a valid contract at that moment.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Bitte bitte korrigieren

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Hornby hat geschrieben:Hallo zusammen,

ich musste hier einige Fragen zu einem Text beantworten, nur leider haben meine grammatikalischen Fähigkeiten ziemlich abgenommen.. bzw. waren nie wirklich gut :| .. aber vielleicht könntet ihr ja einen Blick auf meine Ergebnisse werfen und mich auf Fehler aufmerksam machen!

Vielen Dank schonmal!!!

Hi Hornby und willkommen im Forum! :)


1. How did Christopher amass such an enormous amount of debts?

A: His financial problems began when he did not tell the truth about his personal facts??? besser: financial situation/personal circumstances on applying for a credit from a financial institution. After he got that credit, he started using credit cards and spending money wastefully on a vast amount of useless things. Much to his regret, he quickly got caught in the debt trap and was not able to get out of it on his own.



2. Who helped him to stop making more debts?

A: Christopher’s mother helped him out to stop incurring more debts. She destroyed his credit cards in order to prevent him from getting into more trouble.



3. What is Christopher’s current employment?

A: Christopher currently works as a steward on a cross-channel ferry.

I would not like to work as a steward like Christopher, but if I were in Christopher's position, with his credit issue I would probably do the job, just to pay off those debts.



4. Why is it difficult for Christopher to pay back his debts?

A: He only earns about 150 pounds a week in his job and on the other side there is the debt which exceeds his weekly income to a considerable degree. Without his parents' help he would not be able to pay the resulting difference???.



5. What, according to Christopher’s mother, will be the negative consequences if teenagers borrow such high sums of money?

A: Christopher’s mother is afraid that these credit companies will soon help create a generation of people who are not able to manage their liquid assets/financial affairs and become independent of their parents.



6. Why has it become so easy for teenagers to get a credit card?

A: The competition on the credit market has risen rapidly. The only problem is that new companies do not always take all the necessary security precautions needed to prevent sophisticated youngsters from obtaining a credit.



7. According to the Credit Card Research Group, what is the main reason why young people get into debt so easily?

A: The main reason stated by the Credit Card Research Group is that most of young people are not capable of handling money. A shortcoming in a proper handling with funds seems like the difficulty of their typical behaviour. Dieser Satz ist irgendwie ziemlich ..., ich verstehe ihn nicht :shock:. Wenn er aber ungefähr dasselbe aussagen soll, wie der vorherige, dann lasse ihn einfach weg.



8. When seeking help from organisations like the Credit Card Research Group, what are the chances and dangers? Da ich den Text nicht kenne und nicht genau weiß, ob diese Gruppe "die Guten" oder "die Bösen" sind, bin ich nicht sicher, dass Deine Antwort so stimmt. Sind es nicht die Kreditunternehmen, welche die jungen Leute in Schwierigkeiten bringen? Und diese Gruppe ist eine Art Schuldnerberatung? Ich weiß es nicht, kannst ja nochmal posten und mehr Infos liefern.

A: The dangers of seeking help from an organisation like the Credit Card Research Group are that young people could get into serious trouble because of their dishonesty on completion of the contract. Due to their criminal offence there is a risk of a prosecution. On the other hand they have a chance to become afloat, because they weren’t old enough to sign a valid contract at that moment.
Grüße
Duckduck