Bewerbung für Praktikum, Hilfe

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Bewerbung für Praktikum, Hilfe

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Your advertisement on the website http://www.jobbis.de: xx

Your advertisement caught my attention immediately and it offers exactly what I am looking for: A new challenge in an intercultural and creativity-promoting environment and professional support for my skills.

I recently completed my business studies at the University of xx. During the studies I served three internships.
As I was integrated in major projects I could unfold my creative personality. My employers and colleagues describe me as as a friendly, team-oriented person who learns fast and works focused. I took on creativ tasks like editing newsletters, press reports and product descriptions. Furthermore I gathered experience in brand management, target group segmentation and competition analysis. As you can see, there is an unmistakable congruence between the competences i provide and the demands you mention in the job description.

You would be gaining an enthusiastic and motivated individual and I am sure my working philosophy fits the the future-oriented basic principle of "xx". Therefore I would be very happy if I could serve an internship from the 4th of October in xx until the 4 of April in xx. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Bewerbung für Praktikum, Hilfe

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golovin hat geschrieben:RE: Your advertisement on the website http://www.jobbis.de: xx

Your advertisement caught my attention immediately and it offers exactly what I am looking for: A new challenge in an intercultural and creativity-promoting environment and professional support for my skills.

I recently completed my business studies at the University of xx. During the studies I served three internships.
As I was integrated in major projects I could unfold my creative personality. My employers and colleagues describe me as as a friendly, team-oriented person who learns fast and works focused. I took on creative tasks like editing newsletters, press reports and product descriptions. Furthermore I gathered experience in brand management, target group segmentation and competition analysis. As you can see, there is an unmistakable congruence between the competences I provide and the demands that are mentioned in the job description.

You would gain an enthusiastic and motivated individual and I am sure my working philosophy fits the the future-oriented basic principle of "xx". Therefore I would be very happy if I could serve an internship from October 4th, xx until April 4th, xx. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

golovin

Re: Bewerbung für Praktikum, Hilfe

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danke.......