Bitte um Korrektur - vielen Dank!

[Ella08]

Guten Abend,

Wäre toll, wenn jemand folgenden Text korrigieren könnte:
 
Soon, the waiting time is over and we can all celebrate .... and ...'s wedding. In order to make this day even more unforgettable to the couple, we need your help.

We would like to create a book with recipe, excursion and holiday destination ideas (Kochrezepte, Ausflugs- und Urlaubtipps?). Would you be so kind to send us your favourite recipe, your idea for an excursion or a holiday destination PLUS a picture from you by latest 31st August 2010 (preferably by email).

Additionally, if you have got a good idea for a presentation, a performance or another surprise, you are more than welcome to contact us by latest end of August. Be creative and surprise us.

Many thanks for all your help.
We are looking forward to seeing you soon!

 
Vielen Dank für Eure Hilfe!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Guten Abend,

Wäre toll, wenn jemand folgenden Text korrigieren könnte:

Hi Ella und willkommen im Forum!

Soon the time of waiting will be over and we can all celebrate .... and ...'s wedding. In order to make this day even more unforgettable for the happy couple, we need your help.

We would like to create a book with recipes and ideas for excursions and holiday destinations. Would you be so kind as to send us your favourite recipe, your idea for an excursion or a holiday destination PLUS a picture of you by 31[sup]st[/sup] August 2010 at the latest? (Preferably by email).

Additionally, if you have got a good idea for a presentation, a performance or another surprise, you are more than welcome to contact us up to the end of August. Be creative and surprise us.

Many thanks for all your help.
We are looking forward to seeing you soon!


Vielen Dank für Eure Hilfe!

Gern geschehen! Schöne Feier und alles Gute für das Brautpaar!

Duckduck

[Ella08]

Wow, das ging ja schnell ! Vielen herzlichen Dank