Help me please to correct a couple of sentences.

[Chloe]

Hello!

I'd be very thankful, if you could correct my email.

"Hello H.! On Friday I got my visa für S. and now I can pack my bags. I'm very happy to spend next weeks in your beautiful country. I'll arrive on Saturday at 16.15 in K. and then I'll take a bus to F. Unfortunately I can not write you more precise time of my arrival in F., but I hope that it'll not be too late.
I'm glad to meet you( Ich freue mich Sie kennenzulernen?)."

With best wishes,
Chloe

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hello!

I'd be very thankful, if you could correct my email.

"Hello H.! I got my visa für S. on Friday and now I can pack my bags. I'm very happy to spend the next weeks in your beautiful country. I'll arrive in K. on Saturday at 16.15 (4.15 pm) and then I'll take a bus to F. Unfortunately, I can not tell you precisely at what time I will arrive in F., but I hope that it'll not be too late.
I'm looking forward to meeting you!

With best wishes,
Chloe

Have a nice trip, Chloe!

Duckduck

[Chloe]

Hello Duckduck!

Thank you for your correction and good wishes.


Bye for now,

Chloe

[Tequila82]

Eine Frage von mir waer, ob man in diesem Fall auch Present Perfect verwenden koennte.

I have got my Visa and now I can pack my bags...


Schliesslich hat der Erhalt des Visums Einfluss auf die spaetere Handlung - das Packen der Koffer.


Beste Gruesse!

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hi Tequila, ja das geht natuerlich auch. Kommt immer auf den Standpunkt an.

[joy]

Noch ein kleiner Ups:

I got my visa for S. on Friday......

Schönen Tag
joy

[Chloe]

Hello!
Thank you for all your tips!
I schould write an email and I'd like to make it right. Could you correct my mistakes, please?
"Dear Sir or Madam,

I'll arrive in K. on Saturday at 4.20 p.m.(16.20) and I'd like to take a bus to M. Is it possible to buy a ticket locally or should I book it now on the internet?

Thank you!

Yours truly,

K.L."

With best wishes,
Chloe

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hello!
Thank you for all your tips!
I have to write an e-mail and I'd like to do it correctly. Could you correct my mistakes, please?
"Dear Sir or Madam,

I will arrive in K. on Saturday at 4.20 p.m.(16.20) and I'd like to take the bus to M. Is it possible to buy a ticket locally or should I rather book it now online?

Thank you!

Kind regards,

K.L."

With best wishes,
Chloe

I change "a bus" to "the bus" because you will take a specific bus to a specific location.