Bitte um Korrektur - Comment

[juwel1000]

Hallo,

unten führe ich ein englisches Kommentar über Elektroautos ein, welcher wahrscheinlich noch viele Fehler beinhaltet.
Ich bitte um Korrektur und bedanke mich schon mal im voraus!!! :D



Lieben Gruß



Zero-emission cars have a lot of advantages. Firstly, this cars are environmetally friendly, because the CO2 load decreases by 20 %.
Secondly, there is no petrol excise and therefore no emissions and the car is also quit.
Furthermore zero-emission cars caused low overheads and maintenance.

On the other hand, this cars have a lot of disadvantages, too, such as high initial costs.
Moreover the battery has a short durability of 3 - 5 years.
Another significant drawback is the low range of the vehicle, which is about 300 km.
But above all one must not forget, that this cars are heavy, because they have many components.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo,

unten schreibe ich einen englischen Kommentar über Elektroautos, der wahrscheinlich noch viele Fehler beinhaltet.
Ich bitte um Korrektur und bedanke mich schon mal im Voraus!!! :D



Lieben Gruß



Zero-emission cars have lots of advantages. Firstly, these cars are environmentally friendly because the CO2 emission decreases by 20 %.
Secondly, there is no petrol excise (Verstehe ich nicht: Man zahlt keine Steuer auf Benzin und deswegen gibt es keine Emission? Macht das Sinn?) and therefore no emissions and the car is also quiet.
Furthermore zero-emission cars caused low overheads and maintenance.

On the other hand, these cars have lots of disadvantages, too, such as high initial costs.
Moreover the battery has a short durability of only 3 - 5 years.
Another significant drawback is the low kilometrage of the vehicle, which is only about 300 km.
But above all, one must not forget, that these cars are heavy, because they have many components. (Diesen Nachteil verstehe ich nicht. Ein LKW ist auch schwer, wo liegt darin der Nachteil? Am hoeheren Benzinverbrauch? Aber der steht hier ja nicht zur Debatte, weil es sich um Elektroautos handelt. Gehe darauf bitte etwas naeher ein.)

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo alle,

mir ist noch ein Fehlerlein aufgefallen:

Furthermore zero-emission cars caused low overheads and maintenance.

Grüße
Duckduck

[juwel1000]

Ist es so besser?

Danke



Zero-emission cars have lots of advantages. Firstly, these cars are environmentally friendly because the CO2 emission decreases by 20 %.
Secondly, there is no petrol excise and zero-emission cars cause low overheads and maintenance, because you can refuel them at the outlet.
Finally these cars have no emissions and are alsoquiet.

On the other hand, thesecars have lotsof disadvantages, too, such as high initial costs.Moreover the battery has a short durability ofonly 3 - 5 years and the load time is very long, about many hours.
Another significant drawback is the low kilometrage of the vehicle, which is only about 200 km.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Ist es so besser?

Danke

Zero-emission cars have lots of advantages. Firstly, these cars are environmentally friendly because the CO2 emission decreases by 20 %.
Secondly, there is no petrol excise and zero-emission cars cause low overheads and maintenance, because you can refuel them at the outlet.
Finally these cars have no emissions and are alsoquiet.
On the other hand, thesecars have lotsof disadvantages, too, such as high initial costs.Moreover the battery has a short durability ofonly 3 - 5 years and the charging time is very long up to a couple of hours.
Another significant drawback is the low kilometrage of the vehicle, which is only about 200 km.