Motivation Letter - Korrektur

[schami]

Hey,

ich muss im Zuge meines Visumsantrag eine Art motivation letter in Formularform schreiben. Also im Prinzip drei Fragen beantworten. Es wäre wirklich nett, wenn jemand von euch mein Geschriebenes mal durchlesen und mich auf Fehler hinweisen könnte. Dankeschön!

What knowledge and/or skills have you acquired during your studies or previous work experience that has prepared you for this Internship/Training program?

During my studies in the last two years I was able to acquire a broad spectrum of technical and managerial skills. Especially the knowledge about marketing, computer science and business administration can help me to achieve my tasks in this internship. Furthermore, I think that I can adapt myself quickly to a new situation and effectively integrate myself into existing workflows.

What are your future professional goals and how will this Internship/Training program assist you in fulfilling those goals upon return to your home country? Please be as specific as possible.


This internship is an important step on the way to my bachelor's degree and a valuable life experience. I hope that I can gather practical experience which expand my horizons and help me to shape my future life.

After this internship I will study for 3 semesters to get my Bachelor of Science. Besides the necessity for my degree this internship allows me an insight into the companies’ procedures which make it possible to consider my educational from practical point of view. As a student in my field

experience is a prerequisite for a future career. Gain this in the U.S. increases not only my career

opportunities. It also gives me the chance to develop myself personally.

Explain the skills and knowledge you aim to acquire from this Internship/Training.

Basically, I aim to acquire knowledge about the complex function of a company, to be able to give my theoretical education a practical background.
Especially, I would like to know more about the marketing, the sales activities and the management of an enterprise in the machine building industry. In addition to this aspect I aim to optimize my English skills and learn about the life and work in the American culture.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hey,

ich muss im Zuge meines Visumsantrag eine Art motivation letter in Formularform schreiben. Also im Prinzip drei Fragen beantworten. Es wäre wirklich nett, wenn jemand von euch mein Geschriebenes mal durchlesen und mich auf Fehler hinweisen könnte. Dankeschön!

What knowledge and/or skills have you acquired during your studies or previous work experience that has prepared you for this Internship/Training program?

During my studies in the last two years I was able to acquire a broad spectrum of technical and managerial skills. Especially the knowledge about marketing, computer science and business administration can help me to achieve my tasks in this internship. Furthermore, I think that I can adapt myself quickly to a new situation and effectively integrate myself into existing workflows.

What are your future professional goals and how will this Internship/Training program assist you in fulfilling those goals upon return to your home country? Please be as specific as possible.


This internship is an important step on the way to my bachelor's degree and a valuable life experience. I hope that I can gather practical experience which expand my horizons and help me to shape my future life.

After this internship I will study for 3 semesters to get my Bachelor of Science. Besides the necessity for my degree this internship allows me an insight into the companies’ procedures which make it possible to consider my educational from practical point of view. As a student in my field experience is a prerequisite for a future career. Gain this in the U.S. increases not only my career opportunities. It also gives me the chance to develop myself personally.

Explain the skills and knowledge you aim to acquire from this Internship/Training.

Basically, I aim to acquire knowledge about the complex function of a company, to be able to give my theoretical education a practical background.
Especially, I would like to know more about the marketing, the sales activities and the management of an enterprise in the machine building industry. In addition to this aspect I aim to optimize my English skills and learn about the life and work in the American culture.

Well done Schami! Only one tiny mistake !

Good luck!