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wüddi

Please help me with these little text

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Hallo,

kann mir bitte jemand drüber schauen, ob die Zeiten usw richtig sind?
Es wäre auch super, wenn ihr euch meine definitionen zu den wörtern anschauen würdet. Bedanke mich jetzt schon für eure Hilfe.


New for me was that I should match eye contact with all of my listeners because I have always thought that it would be enough to have eye contact with one or two people. I did not know that reading from my notes would affect the audience’s confidence in me. This was a surprise for me. I learned that we should slow down during the speech because this gives you the chance to add pauses for emphasis. I think that these tips are really helpful and they can really help you to make a good presentation. So I am going to apply them in future.


1. Eye Contact - Direct visual contact with another's eyes

2. Distracting - To turn away from the original focus of attention or interest

3. Inexperienced speakers - Speakers have a lack of experience

4. Emphasis - Prominence given to a word, or words, as by raising the voice

5. Cues - Important words that help you to hold a presentation

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Please help me with this little text

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Please help me with this little text.
wüddi hat geschrieben:Hallo,

kann mir bitte jemand drüber schauen, ob die Zeiten usw. richtig sind?
Es wäre auch super, wenn ihr euch meine Definitionen zu den Wörtern anschauen würdet. Bedanke mich jetzt schon für eure Hilfe.

Ich weiss, du sagtest du bist Schwabe, aber auch Schwaben kennen Gross- und Kleinschreibung ;) . Achte bitte darauf.

New for me was that I should make eye contact with all of my listeners because I have always thought that it would be enough to have eye contact with one or two people. I did not know that reading from my notes would affect the audience’s confidence in me. This was a surprise for me. I learned that I should slow down during the speech because this gives you the chance to add pauses for emphasis. I think that these tips are really helpful and they can really help you to make a good presentation. So I am going to apply them in future.


1. Eye Contact - Direct visual contact with other people's eyes

2. Distracting - To draw away from the original focus of attention or interest

3. Inexperienced speakers - Speakers who have a lack of experience (Hier wird das Nomen zum Verb)

4. Emphasis - Prominence given to a word, or words, for example as by raising the voice

5. Cues - Important words that help you to hold a presentation

wüddi

Re: Please help me with these little text

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ja vielen Danke=)

ich werde in Zukunft auf meine Rechtschreibung besser achten.