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[Andre F.]

Hallo es wäre toll,wenn einer von euch diesen Text korrigiert:

Dear Nancy!
My name is J.D . I am in your class and I really love you.
Perhaps I can meet you after school.
Then we can go along the bean fields.
Or we drive to Hastings on Sunday. There we can go to a movie theater and watch a movie.
Or we go to the big swimming-pool.
So if you want to meet me,phone me.
My telephone number is : 6137.
Your J.D !

PS: Ich bin in der 8. Klasse eines Gymnasiums!

Liebe Grüße Andre F.!

[Delfino]

Dear Nancy,

My name is J.D. and as you might know I am in your class.
Perhaps we can meet after school to get to know each other better.

I guess, we could walk along the bean fields or drive to Hastings on Sunday.
There we could go to a cinema to watch a movie or go to the big swimming-pool.

Anyway, please call me, because I'm really looking forward to meeting you.
My telephone number is : 6137

Take care,

J.D.

Until now J.D. has a crush on Nancy.
"I really love you." is a phrase he can use after he had time to get to know her.
Using it too early is usually very surprising and rather scary for the other person.