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Auf ein neues :D (Brief!)

Beitrag von TIFFANY- »

Hallo Leute,

so hier wieder ein Text für mein Lesetagebuch. Es werde noch ein paar folgen, haha. :lol: Es handelt sich um ein Brief an eine schriftstellerin.

Text:
Dear Mrs Ro*****,

I finished your book “Underground New York” one week ago and I like it very much. The beginning is interesting because there you describe New York City. I want to find out more about it and your book is a good basis for that. Sometimes it is a little bit boring, for example when Mr. **** tells about his previous life. But there aren’t many passages that are tedious. I like the chapter, where Z**, B****, R** and his friends go in the Freedom Tunnel the first time, because then the graffities are described. It’s funny, as B*** and R*** meet Mr. K**** and when he rebukes the both, because they let Zoe alone. I think the protagonists are very incorruptible, because each one has his own character and meaning. You connect the City of New York with the underground and that is very interesting and exciting. I like the end, too, because the arising of B***’s graffiti is a good graduation. You write in a simply English, therefore I understand everything without problems and by the pictures it’s clearer. All in all it’s a nice book,that I recommend.

Best wishes,
S*****

Wäre nett wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet !! :freu:

LG, TIFFANY-

friendly2004

Re: Auf ein neues :D (Brief!)

Beitrag von friendly2004 »

TIFFANY- hat geschrieben:Hallo Leute,

so hier wieder ein Text für mein Lesetagebuch. Es werde noch ein paar folgen, haha. :lol: Es handelt sich um ein Brief an eine schriftstellerin.

Text:
Dear Mrs Ro*****,

I finished your book “Underground New York” one week ago and I like it very much. The beginning is interesting because thereyou describe New York City. I want to find out more about it (about what? NYC? Then you could write, e. g. "that city") and (I think) your book is a good basis for that. Sometimes, though, it is a little bit boring, for example when Mr. **** tells about his previous life. But there aren’t many passages that are tedious. I like the chapter, where Z**, B****, R** and his friends go into the Freedom Tunnel the first time, because it describes thenthe graffitiesare described. It’s funny, as B*** and R*** meet Mr. K**** and when he rebukes the both, because they let Zoe alone. I think the protagonists are very incorruptible, because each one has his own character and meaning. You connect the City of New York with the underground and I think/findthat (is) very interesting and exciting. I also like the end, too, because the arising of B***’s graffiti is a good graduation. You write in asimplye English, which I like as I cantherefore Iunderstand everything without (any) problems. And the illustrations pull everything together. by the pictures it’s clearer. All in all it’s a nice book, that I will/can recommend.

Best wishes,
S*****

Wäre nett wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet !! :freu:

LG, TIFFANY-
Evtl. noch eine andere Grußformel am Schluss...

joy

Re: Auf ein neues :D (Brief!)

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…... it describes the graffities

..... they left Zoe alone

L.G.
joy

TIFFANY-

Re: Auf ein neues :D (Brief!)

Beitrag von TIFFANY- »

dankeschön für eure Antworten! :)

LG