hier hab ich noch ein Text für mein Englisch Lesetagebuch (und es werden noch viele folgen xD). In diesem beschreibe ich geeignete Plätze für ein Fotoshooting...
Es wäre sehr nett wenn ihr die Fehler korrigieren könntet!
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Our favorite place for a photo shooting is along the riverside of the Rhine. There are some beautiful places with a little beach and with meadow. When the sun shines, the river looks lovely and this is a good moment for taking photos. But garbage lies on the ground at some sites and that isn’t fine for a shoot. So we look for a clean place with beach and meadow, because we want to take pictures at both placements. When there is a big tree, we can climb on it and this is a good idea again for something like this. Absolutely we want to make the photo shooting in the nature and not in industrial areas. But when we found a nice graffiti anywhere, we can take photos there, too, because it is then in context with the book. The sky have to be blue and not cloudy because it looks very pretty together with the Rhine. And we want to make the photoshoot at places, where the Dome is in the background, as the symbol of Cologne is a good building for a photo. When we stand on the other site of the Rhine, we can act as if we hold the Dome in our hands. We can do this also with bridges, for example we lift the legs and so it looks like our feet are on the bridge. You see, that there are many places for a photo shooting, but we like the riverside the most.
Vielen, vielen Dank !
LG, TIFFANY -