places for a photoshooting - bitte drüber schaun (:

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places for a photoshooting - bitte drüber schaun (:

Beitrag von TIFFANY- »

Heey Leute,

hier hab ich noch ein Text für mein Englisch Lesetagebuch (und es werden noch viele folgen xD). In diesem beschreibe ich geeignete Plätze für ein Fotoshooting...
Es wäre sehr nett wenn ihr die Fehler korrigieren könntet! :freu:

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Our favorite place for a photo shooting is along the riverside of the Rhine. There are some beautiful places with a little beach and with meadow. When the sun shines, the river looks lovely and this is a good moment for taking photos. But garbage lies on the ground at some sites and that isn’t fine for a shoot. So we look for a clean place with beach and meadow, because we want to take pictures at both placements. When there is a big tree, we can climb on it and this is a good idea again for something like this. Absolutely we want to make the photo shooting in the nature and not in industrial areas. But when we found a nice graffiti anywhere, we can take photos there, too, because it is then in context with the book. The sky have to be blue and not cloudy because it looks very pretty together with the Rhine. And we want to make the photoshoot at places, where the Dome is in the background, as the symbol of Cologne is a good building for a photo. When we stand on the other site of the Rhine, we can act as if we hold the Dome in our hands. We can do this also with bridges, for example we lift the legs and so it looks like our feet are on the bridge. You see, that there are many places for a photo shooting, but we like the riverside the most.

Vielen, vielen Dank !

LG, TIFFANY -

joy

Re: places for a photoshooting - bitte drüber schaun (:

Beitrag von joy »

Our favorite place for a photo shooting is along the riverside of the Rhine. There are some beautiful places with a little beach and meadow. When the sun is shining, the river looks lovely and this is a good moment for taking photos. But the garbage lying on the ground at some sites isn’t fine for a shoot. So we look for a clean place with a beach on the one side and a meadow on the other side, because we want to take pictures from both places. When there is a big tree, we can climb on it to take photos from a bird's eye view. This is a further good idea for something like this. But the absolutely important thing is to make the photo shoot in the great outdoors and by no means in industrial areas. But if we found a nice graffiti anywhere, we would take photos there, too, because then it would be in context with the book. The sky has to be blue without any clouds so that the Rhine and the surrounding scenery looks beautiful. And we want to make the photo shoot at places, where the Dome is in the background, as the symbol of Cologne is a good building for a photo. When we stand on the other site (Ist hier die andere Seite, oder der andere Platz gemeint? – the other side or across the river – or the other site?) of the Rhine, we can act as if we hold the Dome in our hands. We can do this also with bridges, for example we lift the legs and so it looks like our feet are on the bridge. You see, that there are many places for a photo shooting, but we like the riverside the most.

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Hi Tiffany
Hoffentlich habe ich alles richtig verstanden. Manchmal muss ich raten.
Liebe Grüsse
joy

TIFFANY-

Re: places for a photoshooting - bitte drüber schaun (:

Beitrag von TIFFANY- »

Heey Joy ,

vielen Dank für deine Korrektur! Ich meinte damit die andere Seite des Rheins. ;)

Lg, Tiffany