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[Marmor]

Hallo, ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn jemand den folgenden Text durchlesen könnte. Vielen Dank, Gruss Marc


The woman is writing a message on their mobile phone while she is driving. The young man in the second photograph sprays graffiti on a wall.
The woman isn’t concentrating on the street, what is very dangerous for herself but also for the other drivers. I think most people dont’t really realize how danger is it. But if a policeman observes her action she will have to pay a fine. But in my opinion this offence should be punished more strict. The boy is quite a different story. There is a higly possibility that this boys has too much time, so that (besserer Link?) he doesn’t know to do something other than to spray public places. But if anybody identify him and calls the police he has to expect a high fine.
Illegal graffiti causes serious damages, because it’s very difficult to remove the colours. Some people would argue that graffiti is a form of art. This is may be correct, but it doesn’t justify to paint everything.
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Yes I’m agree. A lot of people lives or work in the city, so they have the chance to forget the daily routine and enjoy the scenery.

The second picture is the number one destinations for the winter tourism. This form of holiday has recently become very fashionable for rich people. Therefore tourists go to St. Moritz or other privileged winter holiday resorts to enjoy the glamour. Generally Ski holiday are very expensive.

I can’t identify what it’s exactly on the third picture. But it looks something like a grave.
Personally, I can’t understand why people visit such a place in the summer heat.
In my opinion it’s much more comfortable to go on the beach, especially when the beach is such fantastic as in the fourth picture.
City trips are very trendy nowadays. I know people who fly to New York . for a weekend Their only intention is to go shopping. I can’t really understand this people, than I would have already more than enough after an hour shopping.
Negative consequence of the nowadays mobility and tourism are the pollution. It’s for most people affordable to fly in a city, because sometimes it’s cheaper to fly to London than to go eating with the family . Furthermore some tourists don’t have regard on the nature. So they walk everywhere and throw away the garbage.
Tourism has a benefit for a lot of countries, especially for poor states, for which the tourism is the main income. In addition, tourism create many working places what is very important for the local economic.


In der Stadt ist rund um die Uhr etwas los. Wie sage ich das?

I’m afraid I’m not agree with you.. Kann ich das so sagen?
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No doubts/beyond doubts there are a lot of fascinating holiday destinations in ther world. If I had to decide A place where I’d like to go, I would (kurz nacheinander woud, scheint nicht optimal zu sein) choice Australia. I know a lot of people who were there. My brother was already twice there, because he is impressed by this country. My parents recently spent their holiday there and rave about Australia too. A lot of people seems to find there their second home. Unfortunately I know this country only from prospects. But this isn’t compareable with the reality, because you have to see it with your own eyes.
The country is very roomily (weitläufig), that means you can drive a day and you hardly see some people. Due to the enormous size, Australia offers a wide variety of countryside, from tropical rainforests until deserts. Therefore it’s called the country of contrasts. Not forgetting the Australian, who “ausstrahlen” vitality and are already polite and helpful.


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Never before was the environment such a current topic as nowadays. When you look up the newspaper you see an article about this topic. Nou doubt, the environment will influence decisive the 21th century. But if the environment will affect our life positive or negative it’s up to do. We have the possibilities to take care of the earth, but this needs some effort from everyone. My main message is to emphasize that it will be much cheaper, if we act now instead waiting two further decades. Most of us aren’t aware how simple it is to contribute to protect the environment. For instance, if you buy local product you can prevent a lot of pollution, or if you take the bicycle in place of the car you save the environment and do something for your health.
Ich hoffe ich konnte dich dazu bewegen etwas darüber nachzudenken. Wie sage ich das?



Vielen Dank

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo, ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn jemand den folgenden Text durchlesen könnte. Vielen Dank, Gruss Marc


The woman is writing a message on her mobile phone while she is driving. The young man in the second photograph is spraying a graffiti on a wall.
The woman is not concentrating on the street which is not only very dangerous for herself but also for the other drivers. I do not think most people really realize how dangerous their behaviour is. But if a policeman observes her action she will have to pay a fine. But In my opinion, this offence should be punished more strictly. The boy is quite a different story. There is the possible explanation that this boys has too much time and that he does not know what to do with himself other than spraying public places. But if anybody identifies him and calls the police, he will have to expect a high fine.
Illegal graffiti causes serious damages, because it is very difficult to remove the colours. Some people would argue that graffiti is a kind of art. This is may be correct, but it does not justify painting other people's property.
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Yes, I’m agree. A lot of people lives or work in the city, so they have the chance to forget the daily routine and enjoy the scenery. (Dieser Satz ergibt keinen Sinn. Ich denke, Du willst so etwas sagen, wie "Eine Menge Leute, die in der Stadt wohnen, fahren auf das Land, um ...")? Da musst Du noch mal ran!).

The second picture shows the number one destinations for the winter tourism. This form of holiday has recently become very fashionable for rich people. Therefore, tourists go to St. Moritz or other privileged winter holiday resorts to enjoy the glamour. Generally, skiing holidays are very expensive.

I cannot clearly identify what is shown on the third picture, but it looks something like a grave.
Personally, I cannot understand why people visit such a place in the summer heat.
In my opinion, it is much more comfortable to go to the beach, especially when the beach is as fantastic as in the fourth picture.
City trips are very trendy nowadays. I know people who fly to New York for a weekend. Their only intention is to go shopping. I cannot really understand these people, since I would probably be fed up after an hour's shopping.
Environmental pollution is one of the negative consequences of today's mobility and tourism. Most people can afford flying to faraway places, because it can be cheaper to fly to London than to go out for dinner with the family. Furthermore, some tourists do not treat nature carefully. They walk everywhere and throw away their garbage.
Tourism is advantageous for a lot of countries, especially those for which it represents the main income. In addition to that, tourism creates many working places which is very important for the local economy.


There is always something going on in a city.

I’m afraid I do not agree with you.
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Beyond doubt, there are a lot of fascinating holiday destinations in ther world. If I had to decide on a place, I would (kurz nacheinander would, scheint nicht optimal zu sein genau, dann lass es einfach weg! ) choose Australia. I know a lot of people who were there. My brother has already been there twice, because he is impressed by this country. My parents recently spent their holiday there and rave about Australia, too. A lot of people seems to find their second home there. Unfortunately, I know this country only from brochures. But this is nothing as compared to reality, because you have to see it with your own eyes.
The country is very spacious, that means you can drive for a day without seeing anyone. Due to the enormous size, Australia offers a wide variety of countryside, from tropical rainforests to deserts. Therefore, it is called the country of contrasts. Not to mention the Australians, who exude vitality and are always polite and helpful.


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Never before was the question of preserving the environment as current a topic as nowadays. Whenever you look into the newspaper you see an article about this topic. Nou doubt, the environment will decisively influence life in the 21st century. But whether this influence will affect our lives in a positive or negative way is up to us. We have the possibilities to take care of the earth, but everyone must make an effort.
My main message is to emphasize that it will be much cheaper in the long run to act now instead of waiting for two more decades. Most of us are not aware of how simple it is to contribute to protecting the environment. For instance, if you buy local products, you can prevent a lot of pollution. Or if you take the bicycle instead of the car, you save the environment and do something for your health at the same time.
I hope I was able to set you thinking a little...



Vielen Dank

Hey Marmor,

1. Sei froh, dass hier heute Feiertag ist, dieses posting ist einfach viiiiiiel zu lang. Da wirst Du selten jemanden finden, der so viel Zeit am Stück hat, OK!?
2. Ich habe u.a. Kurzformen in Langformen verwandelt, die sind in geschriebenen Texten üblich.
3. Etliche Korrekturen, aber insgesamt ist Dein Text sehr gut. Also sei nicht traurig oder verschreckt, OK?! Wenn Du Fragen hast, immer her damit!
4. Es ist Dir schon aufgefallen, dass das verschiedene Texte sind, die nicht wirklich zueinander gehören, nöch?

Grüße von
Duckduck
Gut gemacht!

[Keswick (Contributor)]

1. Sei froh, dass hier heute Feiertag ist, dieses posting ist einfach viiiiiiel zu lang. Da wirst Du selten jemanden finden, der so viel Zeit am Stück hat, OK!?

Achso ihr habt Feiertag! Ich hatte den Text gesehen, dann aber beschlossen, dass ich ihn zeitlich heute morgen nicht schaffe. Ich hoffe ihr habt schoenes Wetter! Enjoy your day off Duckduck!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Thanks Keswick,

yes, I live right in the middle of Germany. There is an area which gets all the holidays: catholic and protestant! I'm lucky!!!

Keswick, was that horrible killing spree anywhere near your place? I'm praying for the victims and their families.

Duckduck

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hi Duckduck,

I used to live in Lower Franconia, which is a Catholic place, so I really enjoyed all the bank holidays. Now I have only about 5 (Christmas not included) a year .

Oh yes I have heard about the killing spree! Lucky me I am only named after a place there and do NOT live there. I live on the other end, Newcastle . My father-in-law was in Whitehaven just a couple of days before this nightmare. He did the west-to-east tour by bike, where the cyclists start in Whitehaven and then go all the way to Roker Beach in Sunderland. Just imagine he had been there only a couple of days later. The police still haven't figured out why he actually did it, whether he had a certain pattern but to be honest the killings look absolutely random to me. There are still many injured people in hospitals all over the North of England, from Carlyle to Newcastle and Hull. I pray for them and the victims, and of course their families!

Have a lovely day!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

@Marmor,

bitte lies die Regeln unseres Forums, da steht deutlich, dass Cross Postings nicht gestattet sind.

Ganz ehrlich, wenn ich mir überlege, dass ich heute vormittag recht lange an Deinem Text gesessen habe - bei strahlendstem Sonnenschein draussen - gefällt mir persönlich der Gedanke nicht, dass in irgendeinem anderen Forum irgendjemand genau das gleiche getan hat... OK!?

Grüße
Duckduck

[Marmor]

Hallo Duckduck
Vielen Dank für deine geschätzte Hilfe, Gruss Marc