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[marvin92]

Ich soll ein Comment schreiben, ob sich Forrest Gump um die Differenzen zwischen Schwarze und Weiße kümmert. Würde mich freuen, wenn sich jemand die Zeit nimmt und sich das durchlesen könnte und mir sagen könnte, was man verbessern könnte und ob die Grammatik stimmt.
Danke =)

The problem I'm dealing with is if Forrest Gump doesn't care at all about the differences between the blacks and whites in the movie "Forrest Gump".

In my opinion Forrest Gump doesn't care about the differences btw. blacks and whites because of his dumbness. Hence he hasn't the situation in which he has to conceive an personal opinion.

As Forrest Gump gets into the bus, which was bringing him to his Army Station, he seated himself next to a black guy, called Bubba. This act could be understand in two different ways:
firstly, he really wants to sit next to him in order to make a new friend or
secondly, there was no other free seat in the bus, which was why he has to sit beside Bubba.
Furthermore he has only white friends, who gives him orders like Jenny and Lieutenant Dan. Whenever they tell him what he should do, he did it without discussion. Regarding to this his mother is also giving his son orders, which is actually normal, but in this case there could be a connection between his
mother and his way of choosing a friend.
In contrast to his white friends, Bubba, a black guy, is also one of his friends, but he is the only one, who doesn't give Gump any orders. So perhaps it's shows that Forrest is really choosing his friends.
Moreover there is this scene in which Wallace didn't let two black persons inside the college. Forrest asks a person what's going on and after he got his answer he is astonished, which seems ,though, that Gump doesn't want that blacks are going to college. Nevertheless after the black persons got inside the college, he also goes inside, which emphasizes his opinion that the blacks has the right to be treaded like everyone else.

All in all you must say that you can exaggerate the interpretation if Forrest doesn't care about the differences between black and whites.

[caro64]

Hi there,did you write this in German first? if so, I would like to see it.There are quite a few mistakes but the biggest problem of all, is that I 'm having difficulties in understanding some sentences,so show me it in German and I'm sure I can help you.
Bye
Caro64

[marvin92]

nee ich hab das nicht auf Deutsch geschrieben.
Ich selber sehe auch das das nicht alles korrekt ist, aber bei manchen Sätzen wusste ich nicht, wie ich das formulieren sollte :S

[caro64]

Well it would be much easier if you had a German version to work from. Actually, I don't understand how you can not have a German version

[marvin92]

weil man meistens dadurch meistens die Satzstellung etc. vom Deutschen übernimmt und das dahre nicht so sinnvoll ist.

[Delfino]

ich habe das nicht auf Deutsch geschrieben.

bei manchen Sätzen wusste ich nicht, wie ich das formulieren sollte

Hi marvin92,
wie soll denn sonst jemand wissen was du ausdrücken möchtest?
Ich schlage vor du schreibst eine deutsche Übersetzung deines Textes
und eine Formulierung deiner Gedanken für die restlichen Bereiche.
Sonst wird dir hier kaum einer helfen können.

[marvin92]

ja ok, werde ich machen.
Dennoch denke ich, wenn man den Text eins zu eins übersetzt, versteht man wahrscheinlich was ich meine.

[Alex2010]

Ja einverstanden, das werde ich machen.
Dennoch denke ich, wenn man den Text eins zu eins übersetzt, versteht man wahrscheinlich nicht was ich meine.