Bitte um Korrektur

[jay_mun]

Ich habe einen Text auf Englisch geschrieben und bitte euch um die Hilfe für die Korrektur.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.


Hello,

today it is Sunday again. I got a room, where I can live in June.
In room there are Bed, shelf, closet, sink, table and 2 chairs.
I asked homeowner, if I can bring a shelf more, because I have lots of books.
He replied to give me one more shelf free. It doesn't cost !! He was so nett and I like him !

He lives together in the House, but he lives in separate rooms so that I can use with a female roommate the kitchen and the bathroom.
I am very happy, because I found a good room.
The house is situated near Familiy Song. Mr Song is the Pastor of the church.



Liebe Grüße

Jayý

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Ich habe einen Text auf Englisch geschrieben und bitte euch um die Hilfe für die Korrektur.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.


Hello,

today it is Sunday again. I have found a room, where I can live/stay in June.
In the room there are a bed, a shelf, a closet, a sink, a table and 2 chairs.
I asked the homeowner, if I could put up another shelf, because I have lots of books.
He consented to give me one more shelf (for) free. It doesn't cost anything extra!! He was so nice/friendly and I like him !

He lives in the house, too, but he lives in a separate flat so that a female roommate and I have use of a private kitchen and bathroom.
I am very happy, because I have found a good room.
The house is situated near Familiy Song. Mr Song is the Pastor of the church.

Liebe Grüße

Jayý

Gut gemacht!
Denke an die Artikel vor Substantiven.

Grüße von
Duckduck

[Delfino]

Hello,

Today it is Sunday again. I have found a room, where I can live /stay in June.
In the room there are a bed, a shelf, a closet, a sink, a table and 2 chairs.
I asked the homeowner, if I could put up another shelf, because I have lots of books.
He consented to give me one more shelf (for) free.
It doesn't cost anything extra!
He was so nice /friendly and I like him!

He lives in the house, too, but he lives in a separate flat so that a female roommate and I have use of a private kitchen and bathroom.
I am very happy, because I have found a good room.
The house is situated near family Song.
Mr Song is the Pastor of the church.

Best regards / Kind regards / Best wishes / Love / Lots of love / With love from

Jayý