[Korrektur] Watching Habits

[Neander]

Hallo

Ich habe bisher Texte nie zweit lesen lassen, aber ich brauche unbedingt noch ein paar Punkte dieses Halbjahr und ich würde mich freuen wenn Sie mir ein paar Tipps und Hinweise geben können, was zu verändern wäre.

Ich hoffe der Text ist nicht zu lang


The TV is very popular in our modern society. You can choose between thousand of channels and many different programs.
So today I want to talk about my own TV watching habits and my favorite channels /programs. I am watching TV every evening from Monday to Thursday. I prefer the private channels because there are better and modern films and very good series for the youth. I think the advertising isn’t bad and it’s a good break to drink something ore go to toilet. I’m don’t like the public channels because the program is for older people and not so up-to-date.
So I can say that I’m a “series junky” because I’m watching twenty different series per week. I’m like series so much because there is a good running story over many episodes and seasons. So you can follow the life of the characters and their changes over the time. The best series are broadcasted between Monday and Thursday.
At Monday I’m watching the science fiction series “Fringe”, “Flash Forward” and other series on the mystery night on Pro7. This series are about paranormal and scientific events.
At Tuesday RTL broadcast “CSI Miami” and “Dr. House”. This series are about criminal investigation and medical analysis.
One of my favorite series is broadcast at Wednesday on RTL II. It’s called “Stargate” and they release three different episodes of different seasons. It’s about extraterrestrial planets and alien life forms. And on Tuesday I’m only watch Bones, it’s an other medical analysis series.
At Friday and Saturday I’m don’t watching TV often because there are only very old movies, series and replays. Some other series I’m watching at the internet.
The best featured films there broadcasted at Sunday there you can see the newest movies and the premier of free television.
But there are also programs I don’t like. In my opinion programs like reality and casting shows are senseless and without any background. You only see actors and not the real world and life and mostly it’s very boring. I think these programs are for people who have much free time.
So I can say that I’m don’t watch too much TV and I have chosen a good way to watch TV.


Liebe Grüße

[Delfino]

Hallo

Ich habe bisher Texte nie korrekturlesen lassen, aber ich brauche unbedingt noch ein paar Punkte dieses Halbjahr
und so würde ich mich freuen wenn Sie mir ein paar Tipps und Hinweise geben können, wie er zu verbessern ist.

Ich hoffe der Text ist nicht zu lang


Watching TV is very popular in our modern society.
You can choose between thousand of channels and many different programs.
So today I want to talk about my own TV-viewing habits, my favourite channels and programs.
I am watching TV every evening from Monday to Thursday.
I prefer the private channels because they show more modern films and very good series for the young generation.
I think, the advertisements are not so annoying.
They are good opportunities for little breaks to get something to drink or go to the toilet.
I do not like the public television channels because the program is usually made for older people and not so up-to-date.

I can fairly say that I am a “TV series junky” due to the fact that I’m watching about twenty different series each week.
I like series so much because they have got good continuous storylines over many episodes and seasons.
So you can follow the development of the characters and the changes over time or even throughout their whole life.

The best TV series are broadcasted between Monday and Thursday.
On Mondays I am watching the science fiction series “Fringe”, “Flash Forward” and other series shown by Pro7 on their weekly mystery night.
These series are about paranormal and scientific events.
On Tuesdays RTL broadcasts “CSI Miami” and “House MD”.
These series are focused on criminal investigations and medical analyses.
One of my favourite TV series is broadcasted Wednesdays on RTL II.
It is called “Stargate SG1” and three episodes of different seasons are shown.
It is centred around the Stargate SG-1 team which explors extraterrestrial planets and alien life forms.
On Thursday I watch only Bones, it is an other TV serie on pathological analyses.
On Fridays and on Saturdays I usually do not watch TV very often because only very old movies and TV series are rerun.
Some other series I watch regularly are only shown on the internet.

The best feature films are broadcasted on Sundays.
So in the evening you can enjoy the freeview television premiers or very popular movies.

But there are also program formats I do not like.
In my opinion reality TV like Big Brother or casting shows are senseless and without any solid background.
You can only see actors and not the real world or life and it is mostly very boring.
I think, these programs are aimed at people who have too much free time.
So I guess, I could say that I do not watch too much TV and I have consciously decided to watch only selected content on TV.


Liebe Grüße

Stargate SG-1 was not being renewed for an eleventh season. Therefore no new episodes of this TV show are being released.

[joy]

Watching TV is very popular in our modern society.
You can choose between thousand of channels and many different programs. So today I want to talk about my own TV-viewing habits, my favourite channels and programs.
I am watching I watch TV every evening from Monday to Thursday. (Present Simple, da Gewohnheit)
I prefer the private channels because they show more modern films and very good series for the young generation.
I think the advertisements are not so annoying bad. (Hier würde ich “bad” lassen, da Neander meinte, die Werbungen seien nicht so schlecht, das sie/er in dieser Zeit Kaffee trinken kann).

They are good opportunities for little breaks to get something to drink or go to the toilet.
I do not like the public television channels because the program is usually made for older people and not so up-to-date.

I can fairly say that I am a “TV series junky” due to the fact that I’m watching I watch about twenty different series each week. (I watch – Present Simple, da Gewohnheit) Noch eine Frage: Wäre “per week” falsch?
I like series so much because they have got good continuous storylines over many episodes and seasons years. (Hier würde ich years anstatt seasons schreiben, aufgrund des nachfolgenden Satzes)
So you can follow the development of the characters and the changes over time or even throughout their whole lifelives. (Mehrzahl, glaube ich)

The best TV series are broadcasted between Monday and Thursday.
On Mondays I am watching I watch (Present Simple, da Gewohnheit) the science fiction series “Fringe”, “Flash Forward” and other series shown by Pro7 on their weekly mystery night.
These series are about paranormal and scientific events.
On Tuesdays RTL broadcasts “CSI Miami” and “House MD”.
These series are focused on criminal investigations and medical analyses.
One of my favourite TV series is broadcasted Wednesdays on RTL II.
It is called “Stargate SG1” and three episodes of different seasons are shown.
It is centred around the Stargate SG-1 team which explors explores extraterrestrial planets and alien life forms.
On Thursdays I watch only Bones, it is an other TV serie series on pathological analyses.
On Fridays and on Saturdays I usually do not watch TV very often because only very old movies and TV series are rerun.
Some other series I watch regularly are only shown on the internet.

The best feature films are broadcasted on Sundays.
So in the evening you can enjoy the freeview television premiers or very popular movies.

But there are also program formats (fomarts?) I do not like.
In my opinion reality TV like Big Brother or casting shows are senseless and without any solid background.
You can only see actors and not the real world or life and it is mostly very boring.
I think these programs are aimed at people who have too much free time.
So I guess, I could say that I do not watch too much TV and I have consciously decided to watch only selected content on TV.

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@ Neander
Mir ist aufgefallen, dass du Amerika-Englisch gewählt hast. Ist das ok? Oder müsstest du BrE wählen?
Z.B.
program = AmE – programme = BrE
favorite = AmE - favourite = BrE

@Delfino
Deine Aenderungen finde ich sehr gut, aber ich habe noch ein paar Sachen, die du dir anschauen solltest, ob du mit mir einig bist.

Habt einen schönen Tag!
joy

[Delfino]

Watching TV is very popular in our modern society.
You can choose between thousand of channels and many different programs. So today I want to talk about my own TV-viewing habits, my favourite channels and programs.
I watch TV every evening from Monday to Thursday. (Present Simple, da Gewohnheit) - stimmt
I prefer the private channels because they show more modern films and very good series for the young generation.
I think, the advertisements are not so annoying / bad. (Beide Varianten sind möglich.)

They are good opportunities for little breaks to get something to drink or go to the toilet.
I do not like the public television channels because the program is usually made for older people and not so up-to-date.

I can fairly say that I am a “TV series junky” due to the fact that I watch about twenty different series each / per week. (Present Simple, da Gewohnheit) - stimmt; Beide Varianten sind möglich.
I like series so much because they have got good continuous storylines over many episodes [and seasons / years]. ("seasons" heißt in diesem Kontext "Staffeln", oder besser den Teil [] des Satzes ganz weglassen)
So you can follow the development of the characters and the changes over time or even throughout their whole lives. (Mehrzahl)

The best TV series are broadcasted between Monday and Thursday.
On Mondays I watch the science fiction series “Fringe”, “Flash Forward” and other series shown by Pro7 on their weekly mystery night. (Present Simple, da Gewohnheit) - stimmt
These series are about paranormal and scientific events.
On Tuesdays RTL broadcasts “CSI Miami” and “House MD”.
These series are focused on criminal investigations and medical analyses.
One of my favourite TV series is broadcasted Wednesdays on RTL II.
It is called “Stargate SG1” and three episodes of different seasons are shown.
It is centred around the Stargate SG-1 team which explores extraterrestrial planets and alien life forms.
On Thursdays I watch only Bones, it is an other TV series on pathological analyses.
On Fridays and on Saturdays I usually do not watch TV very often because only very old movies and TV series are rerun.
Some other series I watch regularly are only shown on the internet.

The best feature films are broadcasted on Sundays.
So in the evening you can enjoy the freeview television premiers or very popular movies.

But there are also program formats I do not like.
In my opinion reality TV like Big Brother or casting shows are senseless and without any solid background.
You can only see actors and not the real world or life and it is mostly very boring.
I think these programs are aimed at people who have too much free time.
So I guess, I could say that I do not watch too much TV and I have consciously decided to watch only selected content on TV.

@joy
Danke, für die Korrektur der übrigen Fehler and meiner Tippfehler. Ich hatte sie übersehen.

[joy]

I think, the advertisements are not so annoying / bad. (Beide Varianten sind möglich.) Ja, das stimmt, sorry, annoying ist sogar noch besser als bad, da man sich ja meistens ärgert darüber, es sei denn, man habe gerade Lust auf einen Kaffee oder man muss mal. (ich habe das Wort falsch verstanden, nämlich als „langweilig“.

I like series so much because they have got good continuous storylines over many episodes [and seasons / years]. ("seasons" heißt in diesem Kontext "Staffeln", oder besser den Teil [] des Satzes ganz weglassen) Nochmals sorry, ich habe nicht gewusst, dass season „Staffel“ heisst – man lernt nie aus.

But there are also program formats I do not like. (Du hast wahrscheinlich nicht verstanden, was ich wollte, da ich fomarts anstatt formats geschrieben habe) Ich wollte sagen: Warum program formats und nicht einfach programs? Was heisst program formats?

Vielen Dank für die Anworten
joy

[Delfino]

Im Medienumfeld wird u.a. von Format gesprochen wenn ein bestimmtes Genre (a certain kind of ...) gemeint ist.

Warum nicht einfach "programs"?

Also ich verbinde mit "programs" in diesem Kontext eher so etwas wie "channels" und nicht die verschiedenen Programmgenre.
Jetzt bin ich aber auch etwas verunsichert ob man es auch im Englischen so ausdrücken kann.
Aber im Moment habe ich leider auch nicht die Zeit dies genauer zu recherchieren.