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jay_mun

Bitte Korrektur !

Beitrag von jay_mun »

Hallo,

ich brauche meinen Aufsatz korrigieren lassen. Ich bitte euch um Hilfe.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.

It is so difficult to understand another people.
All people have their own thinking that make us different.
God said it is very important to love the other as I love God.
But what can I do if I see the bad behavior of a friend?
Should I say him directly, "You are wrong and you must not do that again !"
Or schould I wait and do what is good so that he can realize his mistake someday?
I got this Question and will know the answer from God.


Liebe Grüße

Jay

Delfino

Re: Bitte Korrektur !

Beitrag von Delfino »

jay_mun hat geschrieben:Hallo,
ich möchte meinen Aufsatz korrigieren lassen.
Ich bitte euch hiermit um Hilfe.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.


It is so difficult to understand other people / another person.
All people have their own way of thinking which make us unique.
God said it is very important to love others as one loves God.
But what can I do if I see a friend behaving badly?
Should I confront him directly by saying: "You should not do this. It is wrong!"
Or should I wait and do what is right to lead by good example
and hoping
that he realizes his mistake someday?
I got this question and will know the answer from God.


Liebe Grüße
Jay
Good luck communicating with God. Most people never managed to do it although they tried throughout their life.
An interpretation of some old texts written by men about 2000 years ago is not equal to getting an answer from God.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Bitte Korrektur !

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Delfino hat geschrieben:Hallo,
ich möchte meinen Aufsatz korrigieren lassen.
Ich bitte euch hiermit um Hilfe.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.


It is so difficult to understand other people / another person.
All people have their own way of thinking which makes each of us unique.
God said it is very important to love others as one loves God.
But what can I do if I see a friend behaving badly?
Should I confront him directly by saying: "You should not do this. It is wrong!"
Or should I wait and do what is right to lead by good example, and hoping that someday he will realize his mistake?
I have got this question and will know the answer from God.


Liebe Grüße
Jay
Good luck communicating with God. Most people never managed to do it although they tried throughout their life.
An interpretation of some old texts written by men about 2000 years ago is not equal to getting an answer from God.


Frohe Pfingsten und Grüße

Duckduck

juwel1000

Re: Bitte Korrektur !

Beitrag von juwel1000 »

Kann bitte jemand auch meinen Comment korriegieren? Bin hier wahrscheinlich falsch, aber blick noch nicht so ganz durch :)
Sorry, und Danke für jede Hilfe:

Yes, I agree that teleworking brings a lot of disadvantages for the employee. Firstly you must have a considerable level of self-discipline to do the job well. Socondly, there is a danger that you may need to work more hours than in the office, because you will not be ready set in the time. Furthermore, it makes you isolated from the outside world and you feel like a prisoner in your own home. Another significant disadvantage is that people who enjoy a godd gossip in the office , won´t be happy as a teleworker. But above all one must not forget that it is difficult to separate private and work life. Maybe you can´t switch off at the end of the day.

Delfino

Re: Bitte Korrektur !

Beitrag von Delfino »

juwel1000 hat geschrieben:Kann bitte jemand auch meinen Comment korrigieren?
Ich bin hier wahrscheinlich falsch, aber ich blicke hier noch nicht so ganz durch.

Es gibt doch eine Rubrik: Sätze, Texte, Essays, Comments
Also demnächst dort einen neuen Betrag schreiben wenn du Hilfe brauchst.


Sorry, und Danke für jede Hilfe:

Yes, I agree that teleworking brings a lot of disadvantages for the employee.
Firstly, you must have a high level of self-discipline to do the job well.
Secondly, there is a danger that you need more time for the work than in the office,
because you will be interrupted by private issues and therefore you might not be ready in time.
Furthermore, it isolates you from the outside world and you can feel like a prisoner in your own home.
Another significant disadvantage is that people, who enjoy a good direct coversation at the office, won't be happy as a teleworker either.
But above all one must not forget that it is difficult to separate private life and work life.
So it might be hard so switch off at the end of the day.