Proposal

[diamOnd]

Hallo.
ich hoffe der text ist nicht ganz so lang, aber er hat nur 216 wörter, also denke ich es ist unter kurz aufzufasen.
Ich schreibe bald English schularbeit und Proposal ist ein thema davon.
Vielleicht findet wer zeit ihn grammatikalisch zu korrigieren.





Introduction

The aim of this proposal is to present two facilities which should be improved on the college website. The results presented below are based on a survey among college students, a recommendation had been given in the end.

Library

According to the majority the presentation of the library at the website is not well and due to the fact that it plays an important role in every student’s life, it should get much more attention. In addition it was stressed that the school’s library offers a wide range of DVD’s and also the offered materials are very helpful concerning exams.

lg kathi

Sports Field

A high percentage of those respondents expressed the opinion that the sports field should be put in another complexion of things, because every free hour is spend on this field and of course the students enjoy it a lot. Especially fun was connected with sports competitions which takes place every weekend and so this should be highlighted in the college homepage.

Recommendation

In the light of the results presented below it seems to be safe if these two aspects would be featured on the website, because to my mind it definitely reflects the real life at college. All the other points like classrooms or the canteen do not support the student’s opinion.

[Delfino]

Hallo.
ich hoffe der Text ist nicht allzu lang.
Aber er hat nur 216 Wörter, also denke ich er ist noch als kurz aufzufassen.
Ich schreibe bald eine Arbeit in Englisch und Proposal ist ein Thema davon.
Vielleicht findet ja jemand Zeit ihn grammatikalisch zu korrigieren.

Introduction

The aim of this proposal is to present two facilities whose presentation on the college website should be improved.
The results presented below are based on a survey among college students.
A recommendation is also provided at the end.

Library

According to the majority of students the presentation of the library at the website is not good enough.
Due to the fact that it plays an important role in every student’s life, it should get much more attention.
In addition, it was stressed that the college’s library offers a wide range of DVD’s and the offered materials are also very helpful to prepare for exams.

Sports Field

A high percentage of those who responded expressed their opinion that the sports field should be put in the right light.
Because many spend every free hour there and of course the students enjoy it a lot.
Especially sports competitions which take place every weekend are a lot of fun.
So this should be highlighted on the college homepage.

Recommendation

In the light of the results presented above it seems to be safe to assume that these two aspects should be featured on the website.
Because both definitely reflect the real life at college, not only in my opinion but also in the opinion of numerous students.
All the other points like the description of the classrooms or the canteen are not as important in the eyes of the students.

LG
Kathi

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