Hier hab ich noch ein Text, welchen ich für mein Lesetagebuch geschrieben habe. Es handelt sich dabei um ein Tagebucheintrag einer Person, die aus einem Buch stammt. Es wäre nett, wenn ihr Rechtschreibung und grammatikalische Fehler korrigieren könntet.
Der Text:
Dear diary,
today was a really dangerous day. I was so frigthended, but let me go to the beginning of the story. Yesterday Raul phoned me and asked me if I had wanted to make graffiti with him. I said yes but I remembered that Dad said to me I always had to go with Zoe and Basti. Therefore I asked them if it had been a problem when they went to a trip on their own. It wasn't a problem and so Raul came to me in the morning. I packed my bag with spray cans and then we went together to the ghost station on 91st Street. The station was closed, so trains weren't there anymore. But it was still forbidden to go there. I was really excited because I wanted to create a new graffiti. When we were at the station, I started drawing. I was very concentrated with my art, so that I forgot everything around me. I just did my work and didn't talk with Raul. I was like in another world. My graffiti was the best I did so far. It was yellow with purple shadow. Therefore it was really bright and an eye catcher! I was really proud of it. But suddenly Raul ran towards me and directly I knew that a police man came. I packed my cans fastly in my bag and started running also. It was very close, but we could escape. I was never so frightened like on that moment. I was still excited when I went to the restaurant to meet Z**, B***, D****, Mom and Dad. In the evening I explained B**** why I was so strange in the restaurant and told him not to tell somebody my experience. I'm sure that I won't go to ghost station in the near future!
LG Tiffany
