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Svenja09

Bitte mal drüber schauen :D

Beitrag von Svenja09 »

Hallo :D
Wir sollten das Buch My beautiful Laundrette von Hanif Kureishi lesen. Musste so eine kleine Zusammenfassung schreiben. Könnt ihr mal drüber schauen. Danke :D

The book „My beautiful Laundrette“ written by Hanif Kureishi is about two intensity difference man in London, who must keep their love hidden.
Nassar and his partner Salim have a number of small businesses and they do everythink what they can to make money, but same of this activities are ilegal. Nassar live more than a comfortable lifestyle and he shows this whenever he can. His brother Hussein lives with his son Omar in a seedy flat in Londen,too. He is alcoholic, because he lose his wife and he is dissatisfied with his life in Great Britain. To help his brother, Nassar gives Omar a job.
But Omar has bigger plans and he talks whith Nassar about a manager job for Nassar’s run down laundrette. He want to renovate it with a old friend, Johnny. Johnny has been most recently running around with a gang of white punks. Omar and Johnny have a special relationship, but they have sam problems, because no one understand their feelings. Omar is half-Pakistani on that account hate him the friends of Johnny and Omars family don’t accepted the relationship.Therefore the way of Omar an johnny divide.
Hanif Kureishi doesn’t describe only the live in Great Britain of a pakistani and his problems, he lets us have an insight into his life. His mother was Englisch and his father an immigrant from Bombay who had come to complete his education in the mother country and nerver retuned. He grow up in a cultural gap. His life wasn’t easy because he was one of the first half-pakistani in britain and no side accepted him.


Dankeschön :mrgreen:

Delfino

Re: Bitte mal drüber schauen :D

Beitrag von Delfino »

Svenja09 hat geschrieben:Hallo! :D
Wir sollten das Buch "My beautiful Laundrette" von Hanif Kureishi lesen.
Ich musste so eine kleine Zusammenfassung schreiben.
Könnt ihr bitte einmal drüber schauen?
Danke.
:D

The book „My beautiful Laundrette“ was written by Hanif Kureishi and is about two entirely different man, who must keep their love hidden.
Nassar and his partner Salim have a number of small businesses in London.
They do everything they can to make money and some of their activities are illegal.
Nassar enjoys a more than comfortable lifestyle and he likes to show that whenever he can.
His brother Hussein lives with his son Omar in London too but in a seedy flat.
He became an alcoholic after he lost his wife and he is dissatisfied with his life in Great Britain.
Nassar gives his nephew Omar a job to help his brother.
But Omar has bigger plans and he talks with Nassar about a manager position of Nassar’s run down laundrette.
He wants to renovate it with Johnny, an old friend.
Johnny has most recently been hanging out with a gang of white punks.
Omar and Johnny have a special relationship because they have similar problems and no-one understand their feelings.
Omar is half-Pakistani on that account the friends of Johnny hate him and Omar's family does not accept their relationship either.
Therefore the ways of Omar and Johnny parted.
Hanif Kureishi does not only describe the life and the problems of a Pakistani in Great Britain he allows us an insight into his life.
His mother was English and his father an immigrant from Bombay who had come to the mother country to complete his education but never returned.
He grow up in a cultural gap.
His life wasn’t easy because he was one of the first half-Pakistani in Britain and no side accepted him.

Dankeschön :mrgreen:

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Bitte mal drüber schauen :D

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Delfino hat geschrieben:Hallo! :D
Wir sollten das Buch "My beautiful Laundrette" von Hanif Kureishi lesen.
Ich musste so eine kleine Zusammenfassung schreiben.
Könnt ihr bitte einmal drüber schauen?
Danke.
:D

The book „My beautiful Laundrette“ was written by Hanif Kureishi and is about two entirely different men, who must keep their love hidden.
Nassar and his partner Salim have a number of small businesses in London.
They do everything they can to make money and some of their activities are illegal.
Nassar enjoys a more than comfortable lifestyle and he likes to show that whenever he can.
His brother Hussein lives with his son Omar in London too but in a seedy flat.
He became an alcoholic after he lost his wife and he is dissatisfied with his life in Great Britain.
Nassar gives his nephew Omar a job to help his brother.
But Omar has bigger plans and he talks with Nassar about a manager position of Nassar’s run down laundrette.
He wants to renovate it with Johnny, an old friend.
Johnny has most recently been hanging out with a gang of white punks.
Omar and Johnny have a special relationship because they have similar problems and no-one understands their feelings.
Omar is half-Pakistani on that account the friends of Johnny hate him and Omar's family does not accept their relationship either.
Therefore the ways of Omar and Johnny parted.
Hanif Kureishi does not only describe the life and the problems of a Pakistani in Great Britain he allows us an insight into his life.
His mother was English and his father an immigrant from Bombay who had come to the mother country to complete his education but never returned.
He grow up in a cultural gap.
His life wasn’t easy because he was one of the first half-Pakistani in Britain and no side accepted him.

Dankeschön :mrgreen:
Noch zwei kleine Oopse!
Grüße
Duckduck