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Citys and Sight in South New Wales
1. Sydney

Sydney is the capital of the State New South Wales. The city is the biggest and oldest city of Australian with a population of 3,64. In the town exists many museums, universities and galleries. Port Jackson is the biggest natural harbour of the World.

History
Sydney was the first white settlement and founded in 26. January 1788. This day is the “Australian Day”.

Sydney Opera House
The Opera House opens in the Year 1973. It’s a place, where Operas, Theatres or Musicals are shown. It is a emblem for the Architecture of Australia. The Architect of this building is Jörn Utzom.

Sydney Harbour Bridge
The Bridge was designed and built by Dorman Long and co Ltd and opened in 1932. It’s the world’s widest long-span bridge, because it measures 1150m. Second it is the tallest steel bridge measuring 134 meters from top to water. It carries rail, vehicular and pedestrian traffic between the “Sydney Central Business District” and the “North Shore”.

Stadium Australia
The Olympic Stadium was completed in March 1999 hot the 2000 Summer Olympics. The Stadium has since then hosted the 2003 Rugby World Cup Final, as well as the National Rugby League. It is the largest stadium ever built. The Stadium is originally built to hold 110.000 spectators. After the Summer Olympics the capacity reduced to 85.500.

Museum
In Sydney exists many museums. For example a museum of natural history, art museum, a museum of the history of the town, museum of Technology or a Jewish Museum.

Darling Harbour
It is a important attraction for tourists. It is a district with many hotels, bars, shops, a theatre, cinema and many more events. In this is the biggest Aquarium, too with 11000 kinds of fishes.

Sydney Tower
It the second tallest tower of Australian with 305 meters. The Architecture remind of the tower of Stuttgart.
Construction of the office building began in 1970, and tower construction began in 1975.
The Tower is ranked as one of the safest buildings in the world, the design has made the tower capable of withstanding earthquakes and extreme wind conditions.
2. Newcastle
The Town is the second biggest city, because there is a population of 290.000. 1804 the settlement was founded with the name “King’s Town.
Newcastle has a big freight harbour, because of the steel industry.

3. Wollongong
The Town is the third biggest city, because there is a population of 235.000. Heavy industry exists especially in this Town. You can find for example coal or the steel industry. For a tourist is the national park in north of the town great.

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Cities and Sights in New South Wales
1. Sydney

Sydney is the capital of New South Wales, one of the Australian states. It is the biggest and oldest city of Australian with a population of 3.64 million people. There are many museums, universities and galleries here, and Port Jackson is the biggest natural harbour throughout the world.

History
Sydney was founded on 26th January, 1788. It was the first white settlement and the day is commemorated as “Australian Day” every year.

Sydney Opera House
The Opera House was opened in the Year 1973. It’s a place where operas, theatre plays or musicals are shown. It is an emblem of the architecture of Australia. The architect of this building was Jörn Utzom.

Sydney Harbour Bridge
The bridge was designed and built by Dorman, Long and Co. Ltd. and was opened in 1932. With 1150 metres it is the world’s longest long-span bridge. And it is also the tallest (highest?) steel bridge, measuring 134 metres from top to water. It carries rail, vehicular and pedestrian traffic between the “Sydney Central Business District” and the “North Shore”.

Stadium Australia
The Olympic Stadium was completed in March 1999 in good time for the 2000 Summer Olympics. Since then, the stadium has hosted the 2003 Rugby World Cup Final. And many matches of the National Rugby League have taken place here as well. It is the largest stadium ever built. Originally, it was built to hold 110,000 spectators. After the Summer Olympics the capacity was reduced to 85,500.

Museum
In Sydney there are many museums. For example a museum of natural history, an art museum, a museum of the history of the town, a museum of technology or a Jewish museum.

Darling Harbour
It is an important attraction for tourists. It is a district with many hotels, bars, shops, a theatre, cinema and many more events. And it also has the biggest Aquarium with 11,000 kinds of fishes.

Sydney Tower
With 305 metres, it is the second tallest tower of Australian. The architecture is similar to that of the tower of Stuttgart (Soso, nun bin ich aus dem Norden und weiß gar nicht, von welchem Turm in Stuttgart Du sprichst...).
The construction of the office building began in 1970, and the tower construction began in 1975.
The tower is ranked as one of the safest buildings in the world, the design has made the tower capable of withstanding earthquakes and extreme wind conditions.

2. Newcastle
It is the second biggest city with a population of 290,000 people. The settlement was founded in 1804 and its name was King’s Town then.
Newcastle has a big freight harbour, because of the steel industry.

3. Wollongong
It is the third biggest city with a population of 235,000 people. Wollongong is characterized by heavy industry, such as coal and steel industry. The national park in the north of the town is a great attraction for tourists.

Also Ännchen, bitte schön. Du siehst, da sind eine Reihe Fehler drin, die Du "leicht" vermeiden kannst. Schau Dir die Regeln der Groß- und Kleinschreibung im Englischen nochmal an, den Unterschied zwischen Australia und Australian und wann die Engländer bei Zahlen den "." verwenden und wann das ",".
Teilweise kommt der Text aus dem Netz, wenn das so in Ordnung ist, will ich nichts dagegen sagen, aber wenn Du ihn als Eigenleistung vorstellen willst, musst Du noch einmal drüber.

Insgesamt hast Du es aber prima gemacht und warst sehr fleißig!

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Dankeschön!!!!

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Achso und was ist jetzt mit dem Fernsehturm in Stuttgart?
Heißt das dann TV-tower oder televisiontower??

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Achso und was ist jetzt mit dem Fernsehturm in Stuttgart?
Heißt das dann TV-tower oder televisiontower??

TV tower oder television tower .

Gruß
Duckduck