mein erster versuch meinen text hier hereinzustellen ist leider fehl geschlagen, aufgrund der Daten die ich hier angegeben habe. Meine charakterisation ist über eine Person aus einem Buch.
Also hier zu meinem Text (ich hoffe er ist nicht zu lang..!):
My name is R*** M**** and I'm 1* years old. I have black hair and a mustache above my mouth. Also I'm very tall. I like Hip Hop clothes, so I often wear baggy jeans, big T-shirts and high top sneakers. My hobbies are graffiti and making street stickers. But I love sports, too. I like skateboarding and riding my bike. I spend a lot of time with my friends Moog and Raul and then we chill together or we make graffities. My big hobby, too, is to put street stickers on lamps, benches or other buildings. I know it's dangerous, but I like it to create them and I think the city would be more interesting with street stickers. I live in New York and I'm proud of that because the Statue of Liberty is one of the most famous symbols in the world!
I think I'm funny and people likes my jokes. I'm definitly not shy, sonders gehe eher auf die Menschen zu (ich wusste nich wie ich das in Englisch ausdrücken kann...kann mir da jemand helfen?). Therefore I guess that people like to be in my society. But I know, too, that I sometimes have to restrained myself because some of my comments can be hurtful. I think, dass ich zu ertragen bin (wie kann man das in Englisch übersetzt?
My relationship to my family is okay, but I'm often angry about my younger sister Debbie. She's fourteen and a big pain in the neck. But she sometimes coincides me when I do something forbidden and I'm pleased about this. I like my parents very much, also when my mother always cares about me. My dad is great. We often build something together and this is always funny. My biggest model is the graffiti artist FREEDOM. I love his art and someday I want to draw like him.
Es wäre sehr nett, wenn ihr kurz drüber schauen könntet und die grammatikalichen Fehler und Rechtschreibfehler korrigiert...